It has been 2 years since I last read your story over on ff.net. The last review that I left was at the end of this chapter and I was so upset that I could no longer continue reading. I have now once again picked up your story and have re-read up to this point once again. I am still very emotional about this chapter and what happened and it still moves me very profoundly. I think when I left my review over on ff.net I was completely stunned even thought the title of your story is "torn apart world" and you did say in the warnings about a betrayal and I was still completely stunned. And in that you have done an amazing thing. You as a writer through your words made me the reader so completely emotional and invested in your story, I literally forgot that Harry was a character a story. I know that sounds weird but that is just how I felt. Now almost 2 years later, I am re-reading your story and remembering what an out-standing writer you are. I love that you make me feel - whether it be happy or sad -- you have moved me and to me as a reader, even 2 years later, is incredible. Well now that I rambled on, I am finally moving forward to chapter 15 and as you said in your chapter end notes, I will be having hope in my heart and looking for the light at the end of the tunnel. Thank you.
Author's Response: It took me a few minutes to come up with an appropriate response to your review. Merely saying 'thank you' does not seem enough. I am truly humbled and honored. This story was only a single chapter when I decided to turn it into a story, and to hear how profoundly it has affected you and how much you have enjoyed it, is one of the most amazing things I could ever hear. Though it doesn't nearly do justice to explain my feelings, I thank you so much for your words.
Hehe, I already looked ahead to see what would happen because I couldn't take the suspense of waiting several hours before I could read this again. I feel so bad for Harry though... Is it Craig doing it or is it someone else?
-P.G.
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