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Title: The Start of Something 06 Feb 2011 3:09 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter and as with any road to recovery, there is always ups and downs. I really like that you didn't just make everything ok. I have seen other stories where something horrible happens and then within a chapter or two everything is worked out and everything is fine. It doesn't work like that esp. not when dealing with abuse in any shape. Well done.

    I read your end of note and I am sorry that you had to go through a horrible experience of harrassment yourself. As I am catching up with your story, I am hoping this was a while ago and is no longer a problem for you. Now, onto the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    I agree with you on the 'everything's ok' part.  There's nothing worse than reading some really well written angst and finding out in the next chapter that Harry's calling Snape 'Dad'.  And yes, the harassment was some time ago, and has been resolved.  Thank you for your kind words and I look forward to your reactions of the coming chapters!

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: The Start of Something 13 Sep 2009 3:44 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I really like how you transfered the "It wasn't him" part over to Snape at the end. Very clever. Your Snape has become so kind during this time when Harry needs him the most. I hope it's possible that he'll be able to adopt Harry.

    Very nice work. It's a bit upsetting to hear that you've had problems with someone over fanfiction, but I'm glad to hear it was taken care of. Welcome back.

    -P.G.
Title: The Start of Something 08 May 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I just found your story and am glad I did. I do like angst stories, as long as they are well written and this one definitely fits the bill. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: The Start of Something 30 Apr 2009 5:10 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so sorry to hear about all the problems that you've been having. How horrible! I'm hope things are better for you now.

    Great chapter by the way, and I loved when Harry called Snape, Dad, and Snape wished that Harry really was his son.
Title: The Start of Something 29 Apr 2009 10:22 pm
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    Just discovered this today and read the whole thing in one go. This is fantastic. Your writing is wonderful and the development of both Snape and Harry is perfectly paced.

    Oh, and I'm a sucker for the "Dad" slip up, in whatever form it takes, so loved that.

    I cannot wait for another chapter!
Title: The Start of Something 29 Apr 2009 6:50 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated again, and that you can post again.
    I really liked this chapter, and I hope Harry will finaly manage to talk to Severus.
Title: The Start of Something 29 Apr 2009 12:42 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely, heart-rending chapter! I feel so badly for both Severus and Harry. Harry needs to heal and to be able to trust Severus again, and he's working on it, but it is so difficult for him. The memories of Craig's treachery and brutality are still too fresh and trust doesn't come easily for Harry anyway.

    And how awful for Severus, too, to love Harry and to want to help him so badly, but have to go so carefully and slowly. Craig's betrayal was a terrible thing for Severus as well as for Harry.

    I'm sorry you've had such awful trouble in real life and I hope everything will be safe and peaceful for you now! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Title: The Start of Something 29 Apr 2009 11:17 am
Reviewer: villette1 (Signed) [Report This]
    What! Someone thought that you were an abuser? Hope everything is OK now. I love your work and this story is one of my favs. Don't let anyone get you down!
Title: The Start of Something 29 Apr 2009 10:39 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! It was so exciting to see an update. It was a good chapter. My heart was wrung out with your depiction of a Harry who is trying to remember that this man did not cause him the pain, with Snape trying to regain Harry's trust, and with both Harry and Snape wanting a father/son relationship.

    Thanks for updating.

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