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Reviews For Torn Apart World
I loved how sensitive Severus was with Harry and how he massaged the knots out of Harry's back to get him to sleep. It was a parent thing to do. Funny, I remember my Mom rubbing my back to get me to sleep when I was little. I loved that whole part of this chapter. Two of my favorite lines in this chapter: "Twelve years old or not, sometimes you just needed a nightlight." and "Thirty seven years old or not, sometimes you just needed a nightlight" -- Lovely. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm proud of that chapter and it's lovely to hear such kind words about it. Some people felt it was a little innapropriate for Snape to rub his back, but I felt it was very parental too =) Regards, Shoon
-P.G.
if its not too personal, may i ask what happened to you? i hope everything is ok now and i understand completely if you dont answer. but please continue writing, your story is great!
I suppose I can understand how the level of detail in the abuse as you describe it might concern someone...you seem to know too much to not have either seen or experienced it, firsthand. And the abuse in this story is so graphic and goes so very far, that it is quite alarming to think of it actually happening to a real person, and not just a fictional character. But I hope all is truly well with you now.
I loved how sensitive Severus was with Harry. I must admit though, I skipped over the descriptions of abuse. I just couldn't handle it,but it was very well written; the whole story is.
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