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Title: The Light in the Dark 02 Mar 2011 9:12 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww the ending was cute!
Title: The Light in the Dark 06 Feb 2011 4:01 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    I could not image having nightmares like the ones you describe here that Harry is reliving everynight in his dreams brought about by his abuse by Craig. I do however remember when I was little and how I had night terrors. To be totally trapped in a terror and not being able to wake up until your own screams wake you up.

    I loved how sensitive Severus was with Harry and how he massaged the knots out of Harry's back to get him to sleep. It was a parent thing to do. Funny, I remember my Mom rubbing my back to get me to sleep when I was little. I loved that whole part of this chapter.

    Two of my favorite lines in this chapter: "Twelve years old or not, sometimes you just needed a nightlight." and "Thirty seven years old or not, sometimes you just needed a nightlight" -- Lovely.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I'm proud of that chapter and it's lovely to hear such kind words about it.  Some people felt it was a little innapropriate for Snape to rub his back, but I felt it was very parental too =) 

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: The Light in the Dark 13 Sep 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry will willingly move to the other bedroom because I'm quite certain he'd be a bit more comfortable there. Great chapter; I liked the nightlight lines.

    -P.G.
Title: The Light in the Dark 16 May 2009 6:46 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow...just read all 21 chapters at once. its an amazing story. i love the angst, its very very well written. keep up the amazing work.
    if its not too personal, may i ask what happened to you? i hope everything is ok now and i understand completely if you dont answer.

    but please continue writing, your story is great!
Title: The Light in the Dark 15 May 2009 11:29 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story, you get the emotions just right. update again soon
Title: The Light in the Dark 14 May 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this is such an amazing story!
    I suppose I can understand how the level of detail in the abuse as you describe it might concern someone...you seem to know too much to not have either seen or experienced it, firsthand. And the abuse in this story is so graphic and goes so very far, that it is quite alarming to think of it actually happening to a real person, and not just a fictional character. But I hope all is truly well with you now.
Title: The Light in the Dark 14 May 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved that last line. Just beautiful and so meaningful.

    I loved how sensitive Severus was with Harry. I must admit though, I skipped over the descriptions of abuse. I just couldn't handle it,but it was very well written; the whole story is.
Title: The Light in the Dark 13 May 2009 5:08 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was a horrific nightmare, but it very clearly showed the struggle Harry is going through knowing that Craig was Snape and that the REAL Snape wouldn't hurt him, but still terrified that he will. I think the Dementors are Harry's fears of legillimancy.
Title: The Light in the Dark 13 May 2009 2:12 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter and beautiful story! I loved how Severus is so gentle and tender with Harry, so determined to heal him from the horrible abuse he has suffered. Sitting with Harry through the night, helping him ease into sleep, and slowly showing him that he doesn't have to fear people touching him...it's so sad, but heart-warming, too.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

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