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Reviews For Torn Apart World
Title: In Memoriam 06 Feb 2011 4:35 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think I mentioned it before but I really do like Della and I think the conversation between her and Harry was great. I think she did a very good job of trying to explain to Harry about trusting someone, in this case Severus, in order to start healing. But as seen at the end of this chapter, it is still a long way to go. Next chapter here I come.
Title: In Memoriam 13 Sep 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh.
Title: In Memoriam 12 Sep 2009 4:49 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I always loved Tennyson. Great chapter and I'm so happy you've updated again.

    I was feeling a little more hopeful for Harry, as he seemed to find some peace and hope in Della's healing the tree...but it is so hard for him to trust, poor kid.

    Now I wonder if that's Severus or someone else. Please update soon!
Title: In Memoriam 12 Sep 2009 4:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm s glad that you've updated. What beautiful descriptins you write, especially about the trees, the grass, everything.

    Great chappie.

    Oh oh! I think that Harry's in trouble and you left us with a cliffie!

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