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Title: End of the Road 18 May 2023 2:50 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! I've made it this far, such an angsty story but this chapter made up for all!
Title: End of the Road 02 Mar 2011 10:11 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!
Title: End of the Road 06 Feb 2011 5:09 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh crap, I am crying again, I'm such a sap. This was great, I actually screamed "no" when Della interupped Severus the 1st time he was going to tell Harry he loved him and then when he finally said it, I started to cry again. I think I have gone thought a whole box of tissues since the 1st chapter. 2 more chapters to go and I am caught up!

    Author's Response:

    Awww, sorry about that.  I was cruel to interrupt him wasn't it?  But it was worth the wait, yes? =)

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:36 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay I finally got to read it lol, I gave up on fanfiction as the link just wouldnt work for me :)
    It was a very cute chapter, I was smiling like a loon when Snape told his that he loved him...so cute! I cant wait to see what happens next when Snape has seen Harrys' memories :)
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape does touch Harry's shoulder a lot, but I think for right now, that's all he has. He's on tenterhooks around Harry and he wants to show some affection, but if he shows too much, Harry might run. He's had to let Harry dictate how much contact Harry allows. So, I do think it's natural. Of course, now that the trust is there, I think Snape will be a bit freer to show affection to Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Hi there!  Yes, you're totally right, that little shoulder is all poor Snape has in order to show Harry affection.  It will be nice to finally write more huggy moments between them  Thanks for your review =)

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good; I can't believe I missed so many updates! I felt like dancing drunken-monkey style after the declaration too. I'm actually glad he waited until after Ernie was there because it was more natural that way. Harry might have mistaken Snape's uneasiness as uncertainty and he needed to be certain of Severus' feelings for him.

    Now Severus should have the tools to incarcerate Craigy for good. I can't wait to see how these two progress--please update soon!

    -P.G.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:09 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love that Harry showed Sev he trusted him by allowing Sev into his mind. I can't think of a more intimate way of showing trust than that.

    Yay that Harry got to hear I love you from Snape. It does feel good when Harry fully trusts Snape. Now, some things will be so much easier for you to write.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! Nope, not dulled down at all. Masterfully crafted and handled.

    Bravo.

    V.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: hp4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Honestly - this is the best story hands down that I have ever read on this or any other hp fanfic site. Brilliant writing - I think I'll be reading it over and over again I just love it so much.

    So satisfying to follow the realistic progression of Snape and Harry's relationship - it's beautiful.

    Do you think you'll be writing a sequel when this one is finished? I pray that you will.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind words, I truely appreciate them.  I'm not sure about a sequel.  I'm not sure what else I have to offer other than writing really angsty scenes, and I'm afraid that would get boring after a while, you know?  I guess I'll see how it goes.

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 3:34 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought that was a great emotionally charged bonding chapter xxx

    Keep up the great writing xx

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