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Reviews For Torn Apart World
You do know, I hope, that you're talented enough to write professionally? Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm honored that you feel my writing is at such a level. I have always enjoyed writing, even moreso after the wonderful experience of publishing (of sorts) this story and all the amazing feedback I've gotten. I will see where that takes me in the future =) As for a sequel, I'm so torn about that. On the one hand I have some ideas where I could really run wild and write some very nice angsty things, but there's so much that's been done before and I'm unsure how I could put an original twist on things. Also, due to the fact that I AM such an angst junkie, I'm not sure people could handle poor Harry being tossed around again. I suppose again, we shall have to see. Thanks so much for your ovely review. Regards, Shoon
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Author's Response: Aww, thank YOU so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you like =) Regards, Shoon
"Ut vos vulnero, sic vadum vos vulnero. Forever sentio suus poena." ... "Forever?" I think that slipped by your beta :) Author's Response: Actually, after much internet research I was unable to find a direct Latin translation for the word 'forever', so no, it was not something that either myself or my beta missed. I suppose I could have changed it to something like 'prolix' but I wanted to communicate the longjevity of the spell, so I left it as the english word, and there was no way I was going to explain that in the heat of the moment of that scene. =) I suppose it will just have to be one of those things that readers with such an attention to detail as yourself will catch and wonder about. If indeed there is a Latin word that means 'forever' I would be happy to change it, but I checked several sites and found nothing, and wasn't worried about spending hours trying to find it. Good catch though! I hope it didnt make too little sense in the scene to detract from the moment. Thanks so much for your review, and for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Regards, Shoon
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