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Reviews For Torn Apart World
Title: Not the World 23 Jun 2010 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter loved all the emothion and angst hanging around

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Not the World 23 Jun 2010 4:27 am
Reviewer: Alana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just read all 24 chapters of this story in one sitting. Oh, the angst. You are an extremely talented writer.

    Author's Response: Don't you just love when you find a story and get so into it that you read it all right then?  I'm so happy you've enjoyed it so far.  Thank you for such a kind review =)
Title: Not the World 22 Jun 2010 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So beautiful. It's nice to have an update. I re-read the whole story before allowing myself this chapter--it made it even better. As hard as it is to read this story in spots, I can not imagine how exhausting it is to write it. Readers like me are blessed to have your work. I eargerly await the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you for such kind words.  I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story so far =)
Title: Not the World 22 Jun 2010 6:40 pm
Reviewer: lilette (Signed) [Report This]
    I could die of happiness after reading this chapter. Snape reflecting on how much they both need each other was so sweet. This was a really amazing chapter! Thanks for updating!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it =)
Title: Not the World 22 Jun 2010 3:20 am
Reviewer: Antigone1Evenstar (Signed) [Report This]
    Pure awesomeness.

    Author's Response: Thanks =D
Title: Not the World 22 Jun 2010 2:00 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I'm so glad you're back! I was afraid you'd given up on this story.

    What a beautiful emotional chapter! It's difficult to read about all the pain and fear that Harry has suffered, and it was for Severus to experience it, too...but it was such an invaluable and important one too. They truly understand one another now and there are no more barriers between them.

    And they were able to say that they loved one another! And Severus was able to reassure Harry that he had a home forever with him. I really hope that now things will be much better for the both of them.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: It was sweet, wasn't it?  I got a little giddy reading it after it was posted.  I'm glad you liked it and thanks so much for reading =)
Title: Not the World 22 Jun 2010 1:07 am
Reviewer: Dixie Darlin (Signed) [Report This]
    *does happy dance* Whoo-hooo! So happy to see this update! Great job, and I look forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!!
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:36 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay I finally got to read it lol, I gave up on fanfiction as the link just wouldnt work for me :)
    It was a very cute chapter, I was smiling like a loon when Snape told his that he loved him...so cute! I cant wait to see what happens next when Snape has seen Harrys' memories :)
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:24 pm
Reviewer: etherian (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape does touch Harry's shoulder a lot, but I think for right now, that's all he has. He's on tenterhooks around Harry and he wants to show some affection, but if he shows too much, Harry might run. He's had to let Harry dictate how much contact Harry allows. So, I do think it's natural. Of course, now that the trust is there, I think Snape will be a bit freer to show affection to Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Hi there!  Yes, you're totally right, that little shoulder is all poor Snape has in order to show Harry affection.  It will be nice to finally write more huggy moments between them  Thanks for your review =)

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good; I can't believe I missed so many updates! I felt like dancing drunken-monkey style after the declaration too. I'm actually glad he waited until after Ernie was there because it was more natural that way. Harry might have mistaken Snape's uneasiness as uncertainty and he needed to be certain of Severus' feelings for him.

    Now Severus should have the tools to incarcerate Craigy for good. I can't wait to see how these two progress--please update soon!

    -P.G.

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