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Title: In Memoriam 13 Sep 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh.
Title: The Light in the Dark 13 Sep 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry will willingly move to the other bedroom because I'm quite certain he'd be a bit more comfortable there. Great chapter; I liked the nightlight lines.

    -P.G.
Title: The Start of Something 13 Sep 2009 3:44 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I really like how you transfered the "It wasn't him" part over to Snape at the end. Very clever. Your Snape has become so kind during this time when Harry needs him the most. I hope it's possible that he'll be able to adopt Harry.

    Very nice work. It's a bit upsetting to hear that you've had problems with someone over fanfiction, but I'm glad to hear it was taken care of. Welcome back.

    -P.G.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 10:09 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love that Harry showed Sev he trusted him by allowing Sev into his mind. I can't think of a more intimate way of showing trust than that.

    Yay that Harry got to hear I love you from Snape. It does feel good when Harry fully trusts Snape. Now, some things will be so much easier for you to write.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! Nope, not dulled down at all. Masterfully crafted and handled.

    Bravo.

    V.
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 5:24 am
Reviewer: hp4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Honestly - this is the best story hands down that I have ever read on this or any other hp fanfic site. Brilliant writing - I think I'll be reading it over and over again I just love it so much.

    So satisfying to follow the realistic progression of Snape and Harry's relationship - it's beautiful.

    Do you think you'll be writing a sequel when this one is finished? I pray that you will.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind words, I truely appreciate them.  I'm not sure about a sequel.  I'm not sure what else I have to offer other than writing really angsty scenes, and I'm afraid that would get boring after a while, you know?  I guess I'll see how it goes.

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 3:34 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thought that was a great emotionally charged bonding chapter xxx

    Keep up the great writing xx
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 2:08 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You did such a great job! Thanks for the 2nd chapter today...yeah!
Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome couple of chapters! Just the distraction I needed this afternoon from thoughts of my grandma getting ready to pass on, and me thousands of miles away.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so sorry to hear of your Grandma's condition.  My thoughts are with you, and thank you for taking the time to leave me a review.  I'm glad you had a few moments distraction.

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: End of the Road 13 Sep 2009 1:08 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I couldn't wait any longer! So I thought about this site and thought you might post here too and *happy dance* you do. The chapter was brilliant!!!! Snape finally said it!!! I loved how Harry went unconscious straight after, that was such a realistic reaction. It was all so cute! I had tears in my eyes for so much of the chapter! Everytime they dried up I got to another sad part and then I was off again, such powerful and emotive writing.

    Anyway, I won't make this too long because I'll still review over at FF.net, I just wanted to let you know that I finally read it!

    To sum it up: It was amazing!

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