Oh that was so beautiful. So heart-wrenchingly beautiful! So well-written, and my heart just broke for Harry, but swelled as well when Snape admitted that he loved Harry.
Can't wait for the next chappie.
| Title: End of the Road
| 12 Sep 2009 10:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Min (Anonymous)
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This was marvelous. So well-written. I hardly blinked my eyes were glued to the screen. Off to find some eye drops...
:-)
Oh, I always loved Tennyson. Great chapter and I'm so happy you've updated again.
I was feeling a little more hopeful for Harry, as he seemed to find some peace and hope in Della's healing the tree...but it is so hard for him to trust, poor kid.
Now I wonder if that's Severus or someone else. Please update soon!
Oh, I'm s glad that you've updated. What beautiful descriptins you write, especially about the trees, the grass, everything.
Great chappie.
Oh oh! I think that Harry's in trouble and you left us with a cliffie!
wow...just read all 21 chapters at once. its an amazing story. i love the angst, its very very well written. keep up the amazing work.
if its not too personal, may i ask what happened to you? i hope everything is ok now and i understand completely if you dont answer.
but please continue writing, your story is great!
I love this story, you get the emotions just right. update again soon
Wow, this is such an amazing story!
I suppose I can understand how the level of detail in the abuse as you describe it might concern someone...you seem to know too much to not have either seen or experienced it, firsthand. And the abuse in this story is so graphic and goes so very far, that it is quite alarming to think of it actually happening to a real person, and not just a fictional character. But I hope all is truly well with you now.
OK, I reflected on this and get it, now, I think. The Ministry wants control of Harry. Legilimency shows the truth. Harry's memories will show Snape abusing him physically (in silence, but still), and not that it was a Polyjuiced Craig doing it. Craig works for the Ministry and must get a lot of crap for being a Muggle there, so jumped at the chance to be promoted or treated with more respect or something to that effect. Very diabolical plan indeed.
OK, so I was right. Craig is a sicko jealous bastard. I knew I didn't like him. That was horrible! Poor Harry!
This is so well-written. I'm crying as I type this so I can hardly see what I've written. No lines have been crossed. On the contrary, this is going very well so far.
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