Oh, good chapter! I'm glad that Severus found Harry. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm glad you posted another chapter :) Things sure will heat up now that Harry's identity has been discovered. I wonder what will happen now, what will Snape do and what will Harry tell him?
Hope to read more soon :)
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| 17 Jan 2009 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous)
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Great story so far, can't wait to see what Snape will do with poor Harry.
I love this idea and you are writing each character really well. Keep up the great work and post soon.
| Title: Chapter 2: Found
| 16 Jan 2009 8:21 am
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| Reviewer: Fairner (Anonymous)
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Just started reading your story and I really love it! Please update when you can! :3
| Title: Chapter 2: Found
| 15 Jan 2009 10:54 pm
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
| Title: Chapter 2: Found
| 15 Jan 2009 5:12 pm
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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hey.. great story! loved the way you handled harry's reaction to being startled awake.. very real.. but this line seems.. a little off..? not that i'm an expert or anything.. but wouldn't it be better if it were... 'Severus frowned, wondering what on earth THE BOY was on about' instead of 'Severus frowned, wondering what on earth HARRY was on about' because sev still didn't know that the boy was THE HP. but.. overall it was great! love the way you portrayed sev's 'i dont give a damn about you' attitude. haha. hope you'd update soon!
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| 15 Jan 2009 1:26 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I Like your Snape, I find him quite IC. Teenagers are not really humans LOL
I hope he doesn't bring Harry back to the Dursleys (or if he does, that he realises how bad they are). ANd I wonder what Dumbledore will hove to say about Harry being "lost"
Great chapter, but that was an awful place to leave us. You nailed Snape's character, I think. Good job with that. I'm eager to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing.
YAy Good chapter keep it up
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