Oh, poor Severus, he clearly doesn't know how to deal with children...YET :D
| Title: Chapter 3: The Inconvenience
| 20 Mar 2010 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: Lisa Moore (Anonymous)
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I started to read your story, but only made it to the beginning of the third chapter. The plot seems OK, but it grates on my nerves to try to read a story written by someone who can't pick a tense and use it *consistently*.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Inconvenience
| 06 Dec 2009 4:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, poor Harry. But that was cute; Snape giving Harry Potter a hug...too sweet.
Your descriptions are wonderful. Loving this story.
this is interesting so far... please update whenever you get the chance...
this is interesting so far... please update whenever you get the chance...
| Title: Chapter 3: The Inconvenience
| 18 Mar 2009 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: HeartStar (Anonymous)
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I love this story so far i hope to see more.
To be continued when? Soon, I hope...
AWwww, this is so sweet! I really hope you update soon! This is so well written!
| Title: Chapter 3: The Inconvenience
| 06 Feb 2009 5:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I feel sorry for Harry, he's so scared, I hope nobody leaves Harry at the Dursleys. Um, please make sure that with future chapters, you spell Severus and not Severs that you seem to spell sometimes. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Chapter 3: The Inconvenience
| 04 Feb 2009 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous)
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Please keep writing, I am enjoying this story very much so far! You have a clear, concise writing style that I find very refreshing to read. Keep up the good work!
You mentioned that you might not continue this story... that would be a shame! It is off to a good start, and I am eager to see your take on Dumbledore's character. I hope you update soon, I'll be watching! :)
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