| Title: Chapter 8; Home Sweet Home
| 27 Apr 2021 3:39 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 8; Home Sweet Home
| 09 Dec 2013 12:40 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Tiny fingers around big ones!!! *squees happily*
this is so absolutely perfect!! i love how Snape is behaving so typically and the way Dumbledore is so manipulative. Even better than J.k. herself!! you made me laugh all the way through the story! wow, i need a sequel! where is the sequel, by the way??
| Title: Chapter 8; Home Sweet Home
| 30 Dec 2010 5:31 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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can't wait to read a sequal
| Title: Chapter 8; Home Sweet Home
| 10 Jul 2010 1:39 am
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| Reviewer: tobie (Anonymous)
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Cute story. You really could use a beta reader, though, to help with verb tenses, misuse of words (you "dote" on a child, not "dolt" -- VERY different meanings), etc.
Nice chapter. Look forward to the sequel and maybe the series??
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