| Title: The Memory
| 09 Nov 2012 5:55 am
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| Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh, a message from Lily!! That's exciting! Love your story!! Please keep those updates a coming! I'm in till you reach the end! And I love little Shadow!! I'm glad he forgave Albus that would have been hard for many people to do. Dumbledore is such a hard character to write really, because he's so much fun as the kinda crazy old man, but then he's the leader of the Order. Can't wait for Shadow & Severus bonding!! I wonder what Lily's message contains?? Awesome job!
Author's Response: Really happy you liked it! Thank you very much - good to know you'll be around ;) More bonding next chapter!
Looking forward to seeing what's in the memory :)
Author's Response: Thank you - next chapter up soon!
Can't wait to see Lily's memory! As for Shadow-- he's certainly going to be a force to be reckoned with! Manipulating Dumbledore (who is, of course, a willing victim...), and holding his own against Harry, both intellectually and physically! The bedpost scene was great! I could just SEE it! And standing up to Severus, even if he did start out by imitating Harry's cheek! Ha! It would be fascinating to see Shadow settling into Hogwarts (IS he a Gryffindor??) where Harry has long been established, having to carve out his personal niche among the other students who might not see him as an individual apart from Harry, and ultimately having his brother's back against the world, whatever may come. Gee... I'm SO running off on my own little tangents! Well, whatever you write, you can be certain that I'll read it! Thanks for another fun chapter!
Author's Response: No worries - rambling is awesome & helps me think how to set out this story next! Those boys just write themselves, regardless of what I had originally planned for them. More on Shadow settling in next chapter (as for his House, I think he might try to convince the Sorting Hat to put him in Gryffindor to stick with Harry, regardless of what his actual affliation might be!) Thanks so much for your lovely reviews
Another wonderful chapter!! I loved reading this. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please update again soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Next chapter up soon - I've almost got it done ;) Glad you enjoyed
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I loved it! And those two brothers are so mischievous. I can't wait to see how those two make Severus go crazy!
I can't wait till the next chapter. Love Shadow and Harry and love their antics! Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I was going to fit in the bit about Shadow's name... but then the chapter got impossibly long! Until next time, then. Thanks for your review
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