I'm rereading this story, and I skipped ahead..for the reunion it was too much even knowing he was coming back. lol. Once again good story!
Excellent chapter! I really liked the scenes with Lily and Shadow. Is Shadow smaller than Harry because of being banished, or because he is the weaker twin? Thank you.
Amazing! I love your well-conceived explanation for why Harry & Shadow were both in one body! (I'd been trying to puzzle that out since Lily first told Shadow in the mist.) And what a poignant message for Lily to leave for Severus, especially when he realized that Shadow was "meant" to exist-- I can't begin to imagine Severus' emotions when he reflected upon his part in banishing Shadow from the physical world. But all's well that ends well, hmm? I can't wait to see where you take us next! Wonderful chapter! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you - took me a while to set it out the way I wanted (and trying to remember what I'd already written about it!) I know - he must have been pretty torn up. Thanks for reviewing!
Wooo! That chapter was so sweet :) Harry's going to be so happy to hear about all that when he wakes up! Wonder how Severus will handle having two troublemaking sons ;) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you - chapter took me forever, but worth it methinks. Glad you liked!
Title: Lily Tells All
| 13 Nov 2012 7:53 am
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Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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This story just keeps putting smiles on my face! Love shadows full name! So romantic of lily! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Great to hear
It did work! I really really enjoyed this chapter- especially the last bit. I'm really looking forward to all three of their interactions next! Please update again soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you - next chapter soon!
Ooh, I loved this new side of Severus, and I'm glad that you kept Shadow's name the same. I can't wait to see what these two will get up to! lol Snape will have grey hair soon.
Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you - he just wrote himself this time (which is a change from the stubborn man we know!) I know - and I bet Albus will try to buy him henna for his birthday! Glad you enjoyed
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