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Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:43 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    "Dark Moods" perhaps?

    Good chapter--I'm glad Sev is starting to rethink his punishment. Now he just needs a good chance to talk to Harry alone (hopefully Harry will not do anything during potions to make the situation worse between them).

    I wonder what Sev will feel when he reaches out to analyze his son's magical core... Will it feel different than everyone else's? Will it be split due to Shadow's presence?

    Update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Good choice that one... and it begins with a 'da'! Anyway, yes, Harry and Snape will get round to it eventually, and I'm hoping that Severus will a little learn tolerance in the mean time - of course, my idea of them making up could differ from everyone else's :) I've been putting emphasis on Harry's core because... well, actually, I don't want to spoil the real reason, but partly because I'm having fun with writing about him learning to control it on his own! Just one thing - it won't be split due to Shadow's presence, quite the opposite in fact... Thanks for your review!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:21 am
Reviewer: myril (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooh, I sure thought Snape would realize that he was quite over the top with his punishment. While he has no experience as father he should know from being a head of house that such extremely long punishments are usually quite counter-productive. Especially as he doesn't seem to try and find something that teaches Harry why what he did was wrong but instead, as he said "taking something precious to him". Hopefully he hasn't damaged their relationship beyond repair. I can't wait to see what happpend next (hint, hint)

    Author's Response: Ah, he's getting there - didn't want to rush him too much and he did get a nasty shock when Harry said he'd showed the book to other people... you'll find out why at a later date. However, I think Harry can weather a storm quite well, so they'll sort it out sooner or later! I shall try to update asap :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:14 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    lol you broke the pattern A doesnt come after C hehe. hmmm, a chapter title beginning with D????

    Discussions with Dad
    Decisions
    Damaged (if the chapter is about harry and his thoughts about shadow)
    Dark Laughter
    Decline and Fall

    hope these help somewhat!
    cant wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response: wow, I love all the choice you've given me - thank you :) Hmm, in this instance, can we pretend the alphabet goes aabcad? :D May have to change that once I find a better title...

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