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Author's Response: Yes, it is working again, I'm happy! Ironically enough, there shall be a bit of Shadow next chapter as well as the normal Harry/Snape layout. Shouldn't be too long now! Thanks for reviewing!
It was delicious. Yay for updates! Author's Response: hehehe - more Hogwarts/Harry interaction is planned for ch9. How evil do you think I should be? I'm leaning towards very evil at the moment, but I can be persuaded otherwise... Glad you found my chapter edible (?) I'm being odd... ignore me. Next chapter will contain what's happening to Shadow!
Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm glad you're finding it so.
Author's Response: That's great to hear :) I have some Hogwarts/Harry interaction planned for chapter 9, so that should be interesting... Though Neville and Ginny won't appear too frequently straight away, I am bearing them in mind, and I'm thrilled you like my Snape - he's the most difficult, but most satisfying to write. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Oh, good! I had fun making Snape grovel... ha. I don't think he quite realises yet, but he's getting there. Next chapter includes Harry's 'real' punishment, so I would be interested to hear what you think when I've updated.
Please update soon, this story is so well written, and I'm enjoying it immensely. Author's Response: Aww, thank you - I did work hard to try and make it believable, and yes, they have made progress, but it's still slow going. I'm planning chapter 8 already, so I'm hoping that the next update won't take too long! It's wonderful to hear that you're enjoying it!
One small criticism is that you said a bezoar was from a crocodile's body, and I don't think that's right. I'm pretty sure it comes from a goat's stomach in J.K.'s books, but I'm not 100% positive about that. I'm sure someone on this board would know though. I had missed this fic while your Word was messed up. Great chapter--I look forward to more! -P.G. Author's Response: I tried, but failed, to not have mush - I just love the stuff too much! Well, it's nice to know you think it worked, anyway. Yeah, the problems are only just beginning - Harry's probably going to start wondering if he should go to his friends or his father for advice for one, as well as the issue that it's difficult to build closeness in a schooling environment... Anyway, we'll see! Ach, drat, I had a feeling that I hadn't made the whole Bezoar thing clear - what I meant was that the Bezoar came from a goat, but the thing that neutralises it comes from a crocodile. I'll go and sort that bit in a mo... Glad you're enjoying!
Author's Response: heh - yes, that could be seen as a bad thing! I'm glad you liked the bit with Shadow - that bit was fun to write. Anyway, hopefully when I get the rest of the conversation up, it'll feel more settled, but you'll have to let me know! (The next update shouldn't take too long.) |
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