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Title: Choice Continues 01 Feb 2012 4:50 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!
Title: Choice Continues 03 Jun 2009 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh! You and your cliffhangers! For shame!

    I had forgotten that Sirius was still alive in this fic, seeing as he's almost always dead in Sevitus/Severitus fics. This has the makings of a nice argument and possible fist fight--I can't wait to read what happens!

    I also find that Kai still makes me uneasy, even despite the fact that Shadow managed to hurt the poor guys feelings. I wish I knew more about him.

    I'm looking forward to the update!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry! *hides* The chapter just didn't want to end, so I had to cut it off... Plus, you're right - I'm terrible at those dratted things!

    Ah, yes, I thought the whole 'living Sirius' could be nice to stir things up a little... Well, you'll see what happens...

    I'll probably put a couple more details in about Kai... but the bottom line is, he is a dangerous guy, so it's a matter of whether or not you think he's dangerous to Shadow...

    Thank you for your kind reviews - I think I'll be able to put the next update up quite soon!

Title: Choice Continues 02 Jun 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how you wrote the scene between Kai and Shadow and hope that Shadow eventually finds out what he really is, besides just harry's twin. I like Kai a lot. He's a cool and interesting character.

    I also felt sorry for Severus, since having co-workers gossip about you is the worst thing. And now he has to deal with Sirius too! Lord, the poor guy's really having a bad day!

    So glad you updated and I updated too!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you! Yes, Shadow and everyone else will find out what the heck is going on by the end of the story... may take a while though... Wonderful to hear that you like Kai - evryone else is wary of him (evil laughter).

    I know what you mean - luckily, in a place like Hogwarts, it will all die down soon enough... unfortunately, his bad day is about to get worse before it gets better!

    Really? RL is being a pain, but I'll go and check it out soon! Thank you for your kind reviews.

Title: Choice Continues 01 Jun 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Soon better should be really soon! :) Mila

    Author's Response: Too true ;) I'll get there.
Title: Choice Continues 01 Jun 2009 12:53 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, you're evil. Fantastic chapter, but did you have to leave us on a cliffie like that?

    Oh, please update! I've got to see what on earth Sirius has just clobbered poor Severus for!

    Author's Response:

    *laughs evilly*

     OK, seriously I was planning to add more on the end of that chapter but it ended up being even more ridiculously long than it previously was. On the plus side, I am close to finishing off the next one soon! Thank you for your kind reviews.


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