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Title: The Plot Thickens 11 Jun 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, I hope that Harry is not going to get into too much trouble being out after curfew!

    Sirius and Snape on a mission together. Why does that make me very nervous!!

    Yeah, lots of Snape Harry interaction. Love it. Things are just perfect and I always am so excited when I see that you've updated.

    Author's Response: Ah, we shall see ;) Maybe Severus will be in a forgiving mood... Heh - poor, poor Severus - I do enjoy setting him up for disaster! Well, there'll certainly be some interaction between them next chapter! I'm really glad you're still enjoying and thank you for your kind words.
Title: The Plot Thickens 11 Jun 2009 1:38 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    hopefully snape gives harry a chance to explain about the floo powder and doesn't jump right down his throat.

    Author's Response: I shall reason with him ;) But I wouldn't worry too much!
Title: The Plot Thickens 11 Jun 2009 12:54 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! A new chapter! Poor Severus, he was so dissappointed that the Dark Mark was not really gone.
    Mila

    Author's Response: I know, it was evil of me - but it just seemed too easy that it was all fixed at once so I decided to add a twist...
Title: Choice Continues 03 Jun 2009 5:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhh! You and your cliffhangers! For shame!

    I had forgotten that Sirius was still alive in this fic, seeing as he's almost always dead in Sevitus/Severitus fics. This has the makings of a nice argument and possible fist fight--I can't wait to read what happens!

    I also find that Kai still makes me uneasy, even despite the fact that Shadow managed to hurt the poor guys feelings. I wish I knew more about him.

    I'm looking forward to the update!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry! *hides* The chapter just didn't want to end, so I had to cut it off... Plus, you're right - I'm terrible at those dratted things!

    Ah, yes, I thought the whole 'living Sirius' could be nice to stir things up a little... Well, you'll see what happens...

    I'll probably put a couple more details in about Kai... but the bottom line is, he is a dangerous guy, so it's a matter of whether or not you think he's dangerous to Shadow...

    Thank you for your kind reviews - I think I'll be able to put the next update up quite soon!

Title: Choices 03 Jun 2009 4:53 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Man, that was sad. So, he's giving up on Shadow. I don't think suppressing his feelings will make them any less real though. Poor Harry--I hope people start to realize that he's still the same person he always was sooner or later. At least talking with Susan might have helped a bit. That's one more person on his side.

    Your Fred and George cracked me up--lol, they would try to take advantage of a good thing. I have also been enjoying the ongoing hairball joke about Professor McGonnagal. Nice.

    Things still seem to be a bit awkward between Harry and Severus, but I think that will be resolved with time. I'm so glad you updated and am going to read the next chapter!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that is true... but just remember that I might have a couple of plot twists up my sleeve!

    Glad you liked Fred and George - in fact, I'm pretty sure that's my first attempt at writing them, so double thank you! I think I'm running out on the hairball plotline, but it's nice to know that someone's enjoying it!

    The awkwardness will have it's chance to dissapate certainly... but I'm not saying more than that!

Title: Choice Continues 02 Jun 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked how you wrote the scene between Kai and Shadow and hope that Shadow eventually finds out what he really is, besides just harry's twin. I like Kai a lot. He's a cool and interesting character.

    I also felt sorry for Severus, since having co-workers gossip about you is the worst thing. And now he has to deal with Sirius too! Lord, the poor guy's really having a bad day!

    So glad you updated and I updated too!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you! Yes, Shadow and everyone else will find out what the heck is going on by the end of the story... may take a while though... Wonderful to hear that you like Kai - evryone else is wary of him (evil laughter).

    I know what you mean - luckily, in a place like Hogwarts, it will all die down soon enough... unfortunately, his bad day is about to get worse before it gets better!

    Really? RL is being a pain, but I'll go and check it out soon! Thank you for your kind reviews.

Title: Choices 02 Jun 2009 3:38 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! He always gets the short end of the stick doesn't he? But I'm glad he has his dad and Ron and Hermione and some of the Gryffs to help him and it was really nice how he comforted Susan.

    I'm glad he has Salem back and that he still misses Shadow and yet is willing to move on.

    Wouldn't it be funny if Severus suddenly started handing out lollipops for students who got good grades on his potions exams? I think Nev would keel over!

    Author's Response:

    He does seem to get the worst luck... but look at me talking - I'm the author! I'll have to have something nice happen to him soon... Hopefully.

    Oh, I think I'd keel over along with Neville if someone did that to Snape in a fic! Hmm... ideas!

Title: Choice Continues 01 Jun 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Soon better should be really soon! :) Mila

    Author's Response: Too true ;) I'll get there.
Title: Choice Continues 01 Jun 2009 12:53 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, you're evil. Fantastic chapter, but did you have to leave us on a cliffie like that?

    Oh, please update! I've got to see what on earth Sirius has just clobbered poor Severus for!

    Author's Response:

    *laughs evilly*

     OK, seriously I was planning to add more on the end of that chapter but it ended up being even more ridiculously long than it previously was. On the plus side, I am close to finishing off the next one soon! Thank you for your kind reviews.

Title: Choices 01 Jun 2009 12:32 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    That was great . I have one question though. I thought that Harry's name was changed to Snape. How come Snape still calls him Potter? Or is it just force of habit, or did I misunderstand? I thought that McGonagall referred to him as Snape.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. OOh, is Harry going to be in more trouble for skipping class.! Harry has a death wish, doesn't he? LOL! Having a father who's also a teacher, I don't think that Snape is going to be happy at him skipping classes.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! 'Potter' is more a sort of nick name at the moment, so yes, I suppose you could say force of habit!

    Ah, Snape is going to have to find out first... THEN they'll be hell to pay!


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