Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Resolution
Title: Dark Moods 22 Feb 2009 5:01 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    how about "disenchantment" ?

    Author's Response: Interesting choice, I suppose that could be true... Thanks! :)
Title: Dark Moods 22 Feb 2009 12:01 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Denial. They are denying their relationship to the rest of the school, Harry is denying his trouble with Shadow, his father being a git and his friends reactions, Snape is denying how much trouble he is having being a father and that he doesn't understand Harry at all let alone listen to him.

    Author's Response: Good idea - that does sound very like them *rolls eyes* Thank you for your suggestion!
Title: Dark Moods 21 Feb 2009 1:22 am
Reviewer: SpSt (Signed) [Report This]
    Determination, because Snape is set to get Harry under control.

    Author's Response: Good plan, good plan... ;) Thanks for the suggestion!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: madameshannon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ummm....how bout' divided, dispute, detached...hmm this is a hard one.
    But an awesome chapter and story!

    Author's Response: Yes, it stumped me too, but I like your choices, so thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This was well done, and I'm glad to see that Harry feels bad after the way he treated his friends and spoke to his father. But he needs to tell Sev about his magic starting to go haywire, before something happens.

    I also liked Severus's concern over his son and how he interacts with his Slytherins. He needs to be there for them since no one else ever seems to be, and who would know that better than him, right?

    Thanks for the quick update!

    Author's Response: Harry's magic is actually settling down - I'm making a point of it because I'm setting up a future plot point :) I'm glad you liked the Slytherin bit - I always wanted to write one of those after reading AYLNO. Probably should warn you that Severus will end up changing the punishment a little, but only because he issued the first one in anger. I'll be interested to see what you think when I finally write take#2! Thank you for your review!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 12:20 pm
Reviewer: Belelaith (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How about titling it: Dodging Presents.

    Author's Response: heh heh, lol - love it!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:43 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    "Dark Moods" perhaps?

    Good chapter--I'm glad Sev is starting to rethink his punishment. Now he just needs a good chance to talk to Harry alone (hopefully Harry will not do anything during potions to make the situation worse between them).

    I wonder what Sev will feel when he reaches out to analyze his son's magical core... Will it feel different than everyone else's? Will it be split due to Shadow's presence?

    Update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Good choice that one... and it begins with a 'da'! Anyway, yes, Harry and Snape will get round to it eventually, and I'm hoping that Severus will a little learn tolerance in the mean time - of course, my idea of them making up could differ from everyone else's :) I've been putting emphasis on Harry's core because... well, actually, I don't want to spoil the real reason, but partly because I'm having fun with writing about him learning to control it on his own! Just one thing - it won't be split due to Shadow's presence, quite the opposite in fact... Thanks for your review!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:21 am
Reviewer: myril (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooh, I sure thought Snape would realize that he was quite over the top with his punishment. While he has no experience as father he should know from being a head of house that such extremely long punishments are usually quite counter-productive. Especially as he doesn't seem to try and find something that teaches Harry why what he did was wrong but instead, as he said "taking something precious to him". Hopefully he hasn't damaged their relationship beyond repair. I can't wait to see what happpend next (hint, hint)

    Author's Response: Ah, he's getting there - didn't want to rush him too much and he did get a nasty shock when Harry said he'd showed the book to other people... you'll find out why at a later date. However, I think Harry can weather a storm quite well, so they'll sort it out sooner or later! I shall try to update asap :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Dark Moods 20 Feb 2009 9:14 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    lol you broke the pattern A doesnt come after C hehe. hmmm, a chapter title beginning with D????

    Discussions with Dad
    Decisions
    Damaged (if the chapter is about harry and his thoughts about shadow)
    Dark Laughter
    Decline and Fall

    hope these help somewhat!
    cant wait for the next chapter

    Author's Response: wow, I love all the choice you've given me - thank you :) Hmm, in this instance, can we pretend the alphabet goes aabcad? :D May have to change that once I find a better title...
Title: Confrontations 19 Feb 2009 2:30 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I did. I was a little surprised that Harry lost it like that. I mean, did he really expect Severus to not do anything to him? And I thought it was kind of funny, him asking his father who he thought he was, LOL! I don't know, but if I ever said that to mine when I was that age. . .I'd be very dead.

    I don't think Snape's punishment was all that bad, considering. In Prince Manor, I had Sev take away Harry & draco's brooms for two months and do loads of punishment chores for ages and share a room with each other.

    And it wasn't as if Severus didn't offer Harry a way to mitigate his punishment, he said if Harry behaves then he'd let him off early. I guess Harry missed that, huh?

    Typical teenager!

    I think Severus did well in controling himself, especially after that outburst. Update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Well, he had a lot of emotions brewing underneath there, add to that the fact that he's 14, well... let's just say it could have been a lot worse! The bit about 'who do you think you are' amused me too - if I had ever said that, I wouldn't even have had a chance to run!

    Snape's punishment definitely wouldn't have been so bad if he'd as sat and explained it to Harry instead of being vaguely cruel about it... well you'll see what happens. I love Prince Manor by the way - it's such a great set-up! I think Severus did an excellent job of controlling his temper... pit no one else picked up on it! But, you did, so I'm happy :) Thanks for reviewing!


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5