Amazing! I love your well-conceived explanation for why Harry & Shadow were both in one body! (I'd been trying to puzzle that out since Lily first told Shadow in the mist.) And what a poignant message for Lily to leave for Severus, especially when he realized that Shadow was "meant" to exist-- I can't begin to imagine Severus' emotions when he reflected upon his part in banishing Shadow from the physical world. But all's well that ends well, hmm? I can't wait to see where you take us next! Wonderful chapter! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you - took me a while to set it out the way I wanted (and trying to remember what I'd already written about it!) I know - he must have been pretty torn up. Thanks for reviewing!
Wooo! That chapter was so sweet :) Harry's going to be so happy to hear about all that when he wakes up! Wonder how Severus will handle having two troublemaking sons ;) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you - chapter took me forever, but worth it methinks. Glad you liked!
| Title: Lily Tells All
| 13 Nov 2012 7:53 am
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| Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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This story just keeps putting smiles on my face! Love shadows full name! So romantic of lily! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Great to hear
It did work! I really really enjoyed this chapter- especially the last bit. I'm really looking forward to all three of their interactions next! Please update again soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you - next chapter soon!
Ooh, I loved this new side of Severus, and I'm glad that you kept Shadow's name the same. I can't wait to see what these two will get up to! lol Snape will have grey hair soon.
Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you - he just wrote himself this time (which is a change from the stubborn man we know!) I know - and I bet Albus will try to buy him henna for his birthday! Glad you enjoyed
| Title: The Memory
| 09 Nov 2012 5:55 am
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| Reviewer: Kaelisea (Anonymous)
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Oh my gosh, a message from Lily!! That's exciting! Love your story!! Please keep those updates a coming! I'm in till you reach the end! And I love little Shadow!! I'm glad he forgave Albus that would have been hard for many people to do. Dumbledore is such a hard character to write really, because he's so much fun as the kinda crazy old man, but then he's the leader of the Order. Can't wait for Shadow & Severus bonding!! I wonder what Lily's message contains?? Awesome job!
Author's Response: Really happy you liked it! Thank you very much - good to know you'll be around ;) More bonding next chapter!
Looking forward to seeing what's in the memory :)
Author's Response: Thank you - next chapter up soon!
Can't wait to see Lily's memory! As for Shadow-- he's certainly going to be a force to be reckoned with! Manipulating Dumbledore (who is, of course, a willing victim...), and holding his own against Harry, both intellectually and physically! The bedpost scene was great! I could just SEE it! And standing up to Severus, even if he did start out by imitating Harry's cheek! Ha! It would be fascinating to see Shadow settling into Hogwarts (IS he a Gryffindor??) where Harry has long been established, having to carve out his personal niche among the other students who might not see him as an individual apart from Harry, and ultimately having his brother's back against the world, whatever may come. Gee... I'm SO running off on my own little tangents! Well, whatever you write, you can be certain that I'll read it! Thanks for another fun chapter!
Author's Response: No worries - rambling is awesome & helps me think how to set out this story next! Those boys just write themselves, regardless of what I had originally planned for them. More on Shadow settling in next chapter (as for his House, I think he might try to convince the Sorting Hat to put him in Gryffindor to stick with Harry, regardless of what his actual affliation might be!) Thanks so much for your lovely reviews
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! I've waited SO long for Shadow to be reunited with Harry, but this is way better than I'd ever imagined it happening! I'm so happy for EVERYONE! And all the reactions from the characters were wonderful! I just hope we get the chance to see Severus bonding with his newest son! Fantastic chapter! Well worth the wait! :-D
Author's Response: *grins* You're reaction made me very happy - thank you. I'm thrilled you liked this chapter - and there will definitely be Snape/Shadow bonding soon ;)
| Title: Reunion at Last
| 05 Nov 2012 3:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Kaelise (Anonymous)
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Yay! Im so happy for shadow & Harry! Cant wait to see how shadow adjusts to reality? And serverus & shadow bonding I so look forward too! Not to mention everyones reaction!,i love your stories!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. There will definitely be Shadow/Snape bonding in the next chapter, so stay tuned! Really glad you're enjoying
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