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Title: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009 11:22 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    "Thankfully he now has his friends to rely on. Otherwise, I would be quite worried about letting him out of my sight in a temper like that one."

    Harry's mad at his friends right now, so he's not going to turn to them, is he? Oh dear, I hope he doesn't go off and do something rash. Now you've gotten me worried about the poor lad.

    Anyway, I think Sev will realize that he shouldn't have been so harsh sooner or later (hopefully sooner). It was dangerous for Harry to take the book, but Harry acted with care while he had it and nothing bad happened. I don't think he deserves such a big punishment.

    Update soon--I hope Harry's okay!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Don't worry, Harry won't do anything too rash - you'll see next chapter, and hopefully he'll soon be able to make up with Hermione as well. Severus will realise he's been harsh and try to make up... and at a later date, I may reveal precisely why he reacted so strongly! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a vicious punishment! Not unreasonable, of course, but I guess Snape will have to wait for a looong while before Harry calms down about it. Mila

    Author's Response: It was a little cruel, but there was a reason for Severus overreacting... Hopefully I'll be able to write them to reconcile soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009 6:25 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    "Anyone ever wondered what would happen if you clicked the review button without writing anything?"

    what happens is you get scolded! ;-)

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you for finding out! That's been bothering me for some time now...
Title: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: jflame (Signed) [Report This]
    Yet again another brilliant story.
    I liked how Snape is still snarky.
    Good job

    Author's Response: Thank you - writing snarky Snape is a bit like my drug :) Just can't get enough of it!
Title: Confrontations 17 Feb 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a chapter! I hate Severus too!

    His punishment seems way over the top. Won't this set their bonding back quite a ways?

    Will Snape relent or will you make Harry be the one to end up just accepting this as just? I hope not -- I want Snape to see that Harry deserves some kindness rather than harshness.

    Author's Response: Ah, you shall see what I'll do... But, anyway, there was a reason for Severus overreacting like he did, but that won't become apparent until later (not that he should have anyway, but that's by the by). Harry does need to apologise properly, but so will Severus! If we're lucky, this won't set them back by much, but it will a little. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Confrontations 16 Feb 2009 10:27 pm
Reviewer: maquislady1388 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank god Harry stood up for himself. I hate it when writers turn Harry into a woosey nancy boy. I'm glad to see you've avoided that chliche nicely. Snape seemed to get to harsh with Harry. theres a line that you don't cross when punishing your children, and Snape not only stepped over the line he did the long jump over it. But thats in keeping with his charecter. I'm glad to say I think you've managed to keep the them in charecter nicely. It was about time they had a blow up. We couldn't expect Harry and Snape to adjust to their new situation with out a few bumps in the road.
    It was refreshing to see a suportive Ron and Hermione be the one who freaks out. I eagerly await your next chapter

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry, Harry won't lose any of his determination - I enjoy writing independant!Harry too much for that. (however, I will need you to inform me if you think otherwise:). ) Yes, Snape did overreact in a big way and though there is a reason for that (not yet revealed) he really shouldn't have behaved the way he did. It's like you said - they're still learning about each other and there's bound to be mistakes along the way!

    I'm glad you liked Ron and Hermione - I liked writing them that way. I really think it should be done more often like that. Thanks for your review! Next chapter coming soon.

Title: Confrontations 16 Feb 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, do you really want me to do that! Then you wouldn't know how much I love this chapter. Yes it was really creepy when Sev told him to eat something!

    I love Harry this way, that MUST have been fun to write. I hate when Harry is made too wimpy. I love when he has some backbone, and he certainly has a lot here! LOL!

    Great chapter, I simply can't wait for the next one. Hey, is Sev planning on telling his Slytherins at all about Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Well, I'm glad you didn't anyway :) I really didn't realise how creepy that line sounded until I read it over, and then I got the chills down my spine! Harry was great fun to write - his emotional reactions are a little confused at the moment (as will become more apparent in later chapters) but I can't see him losing any of that fierce determination or backbone.

    Thanks, glad you liked! Severus isn't planning to tell them, but they will find out soon enough anyway... The most Dumbledore managed to buy for Harry was a few hours of anonymity.

Title: Confrontations 16 Feb 2009 7:05 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that should be an interesting Slytherin meeting - considering Harry let the cat out of the bag at the feast.

    Author's Response: He did make a scene, but he actually said the bit about Severus being his father rather quietly... everyone's realisations will come later. However, I hope you'll enjoy the Slytherin meeting anyway!
Title: Confrontations 16 Feb 2009 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter. I was sorry Harry and Severus didn't get a little more father/son time before the big blow-up though.

    Author's Response: Thank you - don't worry, they'll get there. They're still learning about each other, and to be fair, this was really both their faults (even though Severus should have controlled his temper better).
Title: Back to Hogwarts 15 Feb 2009 12:35 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was very snealy and Slytherin of Severus to reveal his relationship to Harry that way. Well done!

    I wonder what else he's going to do to Harry for taking the book without asking? Update soon!

    Author's Response: hehe - thank you :) Couldn't resist. Next chapter will be up soon - and tempers will be lost on both sides, however I will leave it to you to guess who manages to control theirs...

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