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Reviews For The Summer
Title: The Summer 05 Mar 2009 3:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this story is great! I just can't wait for the next update!

    I love how Dumbledore manipulated the both of them, but at least they'll both profit from it.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! It was about time Dumbledore did something nice for the boys! Mila
Title: The Summer 05 Mar 2009 3:11 am
Reviewer: mnfm (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm working on the next part. Mila
Title: The Summer 04 Mar 2009 9:25 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Quite a good start! You covered a lot of ground. Only thing is that everything went so smoothly that I can't but feel that something will - needs - to occur to put things off balance and add some tension. I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review!  Someone will die - guess who? :-) Mila

Title: The Summer 04 Mar 2009 9:24 pm
Reviewer: Sid (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not half bad. A little fast paced and some grammar errors, but overall pretty good. Keep it up.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review!

    The style of writing was intentional - I wanted to avoid writing predictable scenes, so I left them out.  :)

    Sorry about the mistakes. I am not a native speaker. My beta did wonderfully, she corrected numerous wrong tenses and added missing comas. Without her, I wouldn't publish anything :)

    Mila


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