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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: A Way Out 01 Mar 2015 7:08 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    This fic sounds very promising. Excellent start.

    Decided to wait to read the pre-quel until reach that section in this fic or immediately after this one. It sounded like it was an -outtake- of sorts... so anyway, I started here! lol.

    Liked your banner for this. I pulled up 2 pics of red-tailed hawks. (I like visuals for a fic...) Beautiful. Graceful.

    --his
Title: A Way Out 06 Feb 2010 4:14 pm
Reviewer: penguins1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow - things are going to get interesting!

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, they are! Just keep reading!
Title: A Way Out 17 Jul 2009 8:39 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, I feel bad for Harry. He tried to explain but Sev wouldnt let him. Dont be so stubborn and let him tell you he cares for you Sev!

    Author's Response: That's right, Sev! he really does care for you.
Title: A Way Out 08 Jun 2009 6:25 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I cant wait to see the relationship between Snape and Harry in bird form. That will be a funny sight to read! Great imagination in making Harry into a hawk.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It will be very interesting and I always thought Harry would make a fine hawk, since he loves flying and all.  Just wait till you see what happens next. 
Title: A Way Out 23 May 2009 10:04 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like a promising beginning for an interesting story. And birds rock! And Harry rocks... and Severus... Right, I guess I should return to the story now.

    Author's Response: They all do! I love ALL of them! Enjoy amd thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: A Way Out 05 May 2009 11:13 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely start. Am looking forward to reading more. It seems that HArry has been abandoned by his friends. I know he is also distancing himself bu canon Hermione would never have let that happen.

    Is DD going to be a bad guy in this, I wonder? will it just be Harry and Severus against the rest of the world, including, dD, Harry and Hermione? These aren't my favourite themes, I must admit, but your story is original and I do not yet know whether Harry will turn his back on everyone but Severus or whether they will turn against him.

    Onwards...

    wrappedinharry

    Author's Response:

    Hi,

    Well, Harry thinks he's been abandoned by his friends.  Ron and Hermione have been a bit too wrapped up in themselves and Harry is a good enough actor to hide what he feels, so they didn't notice anything was really wrong.  Right now he's very depressed and thinking he is all alone and no one cares for him, and that's why he seek his Animagus form--because anything has to be better than this. 

    Dumbledore is not "bad" in this story, but he does have blind spots and good intentions that go wrong, very wrong, but you'll see that as the story progresses.  This story is mostly harry and Severus forging a relationship out of mistrust and resentment, but Ron and Hermione will be back in it eventually, they are still his friends, but Harry will also make a few new friends.

    Thank you for reading!

Title: A Way Out 22 Mar 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! This is a really interesting first chapter. I especially like that Harry loses his memory, I guess he will see Snape without all their history. I'm looking forward to the next chpater.

    Author's Response: He will and he's in for quite a shock, as Snape inadvertantly reveals things he's kept hidden for a long time! But the next chapter mostly deals with Severus trying to heal Harry's wings, not an easy task!
Title: A Way Out 22 Mar 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know I love you, right?

    Ok. ::claps hands:: Where is it??? I've been gone for a week and there's /still/ no sequel to Prince or Angel? ::begins to pull out hair:: Am I gonna have to come down there and /make/ you sit down and write it???

    Poor Harry not remember that he's a human with so many problems. He needs an adult in his life and Severus is just the person to do that.

    Update soon, darling.

    Love always,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    I know, I know! And I'm working on it, really!

    But this one just snagged me and I just HAD to write it!

    I have a partial rough draft for Heir and another for Angel.

    And harry's amnesia might prove both blessing and curse, though he will eventually regain his memory.  And then let certain wizards beware!

Title: A Way Out 21 Mar 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful start! Be careful about stepping on toes though - you might want to read "The Last Gift," so that you don't inadvertantly make your story too similar. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll skim it, but this one is something I thought up on the spur of the moment, and I don't recall any fics recently with harry as a hawk.  The next chapter's up!
Title: A Way Out 21 Mar 2009 12:17 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    COOL! I like it! Do more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I just did!

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