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Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    NOOOOOO YOu can't stop there! Glares daggers at the screen. You CAN'T leave us there! Please tell me that Snape has SOME sort of monior on our poor young Hawk. (Wait, doesn't Snape have Wards like Crazy all over his private space? HOw did those dunderheads get in without being caught? I mean Harry, Ron, and Hermione were only able to steal from the classroom storage area when they made the polyjuice potion--But his Private Stores???? Those boys had best be caught and squashed or my admiriation for Snapes Slytherin sneakiness will be completely undermined.)

    MORE SOON PLEASE!

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Snape does have things unseen in his laboratory, and ESPECIALLY on his private stock. 

    Those three are going to be praying for expulsion when he gets through with them.

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 2:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, Draco you are asking for trouble with a capital T! Insane I tell you!. And Crabbe and Goyle; well they're just idiots to follow Draco's lead.

    I'm really worried for Harry though. Hope Snape catches the lot of them.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Draco really is insane and he's going to regret it! Big time! As for his two partners, yes they are idiots for following him, and they're going to regret it too!

    Harry is in a bad way now, but Severus should be able to save him.  And he will catch the Slippery Trio, he's not a master spy for nothing! 

    Guess what? I've updated . . .again!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please do keep updating insanely fast! I love ur story!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I shall and I have!
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 10:55 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Never liked Draco. Pity the hawk did not bit his face!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, now that would be hard to explain.  "Mr. Malfoy why is your nose missing?"--Snape.

    Draco--"Uh . . .well . . .there was an accident . . ."

    Hope you like the next part, it involves Snape & Hagrid and a rather revealing conversation, just posted it late last night!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 6:36 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco is SUCH a F*CKING BRAT!!!

    Author's Response:

    I agree, he's as nasty as they come!

    FYI--an update is here!

Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:48 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no oh no oh no!!!!! Poor Harry!hawk! Draco is such a cruel, little prissy boy and i hope that he gets into trouble!! Yikes!

    I do hope that Snape will come soon! So awful!

    Great writing and good development of the story! Thanks for the quick updates!

    Author's Response: He is, just like in third year when he made the hippogriff bite him.  Severus will come and Draco will pay for this, one way or another.
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:19 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I hope that Harry remembers this and tells Snape.

    Author's Response: he will remember it, but in order for him to tell Severus anything, they have to speak the same language.  Or Severus could find out another way.  Check out the next chappie to see how.
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:18 am
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Signed) [Report This]
    ACK! NO! you cant leave him hanging like that! more please.....!

    Author's Response: Okay, more is posted!
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:12 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I bet Crabbe will come back and fix him. I remember the summary of this saying something about how Harry would discover the people who were true friends in this story and I think that could easily include some people we didn't expect. At least, I hope that's what happens--I'd like to see Crabbe with a heart.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: It could, but Severus will NOT be pleased to find him there! And especially not when he learns what went on there besides the theft of his ingredients.  Hell hath no fury like Snape when his hawk is threatened.  And now you can see Sev's POV as he searches for Harry. 
Title: Intruder 24 Mar 2009 5:08 am
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    it's great. I'm still enjoying it plenty. :)

    I just hope draco and company gets caught. Just once...

    Author's Response: They will, Snape's not dumb, there are silent wards all over his lab, and especially his private potions store, as you'll see. 

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