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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: Good idea! Thanks!
Author's Response: Good idea and thanks. I like Crabbe being in charge for once, maybe he can teach Malfoy how to share, LOL! I wanted make him a real character for a change and not just Draco's goon.
Draco...hmmm I will say that he shouldn't get away with blaming Crabbe and Crabbe should get a lesser sentence for coming clean. But that's just me. I thought about making the boys stand by while everyone in their house go through their things so they'll experience the same violation, but that would never be allowed. Maybe, in addition to lines, essays, and cleaning, and suspension from quiddich & Hogsmeade, they should have a prefect escort them everywhere for the next several weeks, since they can't be trusted on their own. Author's Response: I know, if I wrote 10,000 words it still wouldn't be long enough, right? But that's a compliment, so thank you. No, and he won't especially since Severus already has the whole story from Crabbe, so Draco can't try and weasel out of it by saying it all the other two's fault. Yes, Crabbe should get a reduced sentence, for telling the truth and helping the hawk. I like your first punishment, but that wouldn't be good school policy. The prefect idea is good as are some of the other ideas you mention. I may have to use several ideas, since there are a lot of good ones.
You have created a wonderful story here, and I can't wait to read more of it. ;-} I love how Hagrid watches out for Severus and all. Most people write him as really really dim, but you have expanded his character incredibly. I love that he can see the "injured" students and tries so hard to help them. I also love how you have charectorized Severus. He isn't just "the greasy bat of the dunguns", he has other faces than just that one. And I love that you are writing like you are. Don't Stop. As for Malfoy & Co.'s punishment, maybe something that will make a lasting impression. 10,000 lines each, detention every night for the next year, and perhaps expulsion from the quiditich team. After all, they not only broke into their professor (and Head of House)'s office and stole ingredients and a cauldron, but they also nearly killed said Head's new familiar. Needless to say revenge will be sweet for Severus. ;-} All in all, the whole story is absolutely brilliant! ;-} Leilia Author's Response: Thanks!! I wanted to have Hagrid in a different light, I always thought there was more to him than the bumbling gamekeeper, know what I mean? After all, he was once a wizard too. I figured him being a kind of mentor to the hurt and outcast students made sense, he's the kind of perosn to see good in monsters and try and help them, so it would be easy for him to see a student in emotional pain and help them too. And God knew Severus needed him and so does Harry. I love showing the secret side of Snape, it's like opening a fortune cookie, you neve rknow what kind of emotion he'll reveal next. True, very true, and I'll consider carefully what kind of punishments they ought to get. Severus would agree with you!
Send Draco and his goons HERE and I will take care of the punishments. Author's Response: Uh, yeah, unless you wear contacts and can always say you got something in them and it's making you cry. Okay, I'm getting a Portkey ready now . . .give to 'em good! Send a report back when you're finished so i can see what you did, okay?
You are seriously lucky that I like you. Don't expel the boys; I think that would be too harsh. But they definitely need to be taught a lesson about entering someone's private room and lacking the respect for that privacy. I can relate to Severus; I'm an extremely private person and I hate people touching my stuff without my express permission. Update soon darling. Your stories are the light in my dark little world. Love always, Jewels. Author's Response: Oh really? *smirks*
No, I wouldn't expel them, we need them to cause more trouble for Harry and friends. Although Crabbe might not be as bad as he's made out in canon in this story. But I do have a few other things in mind that they won't like at all. So can I, I'm a fanatic about anyone rummaging thru my stuff. Thanks, Julie! ;)
And about punishment; what about: For the stolen ingredients - they must go to the Forbiden forest and find them(they must learn that find some ingredients is very difficult) and for the hurt of the hawk - they can for example help Hagrid with his animals and beasts(another lesson for them). I think that the slitherins will hate both these punishments...=o) Sorry for mistakes, I am not native speaker of English. Bye Author's Response: No problem! Thanks for the ideas, they're really interesting, and you're right, the Slyhts would hate those punishments. Draco I think hates the Forbidden Forest since his detention in it first year and he also isn't too fond of Hagrid considering what happened to him in third year with Buckbeak. |
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