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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Hawk Speak 01 Apr 2009 3:37 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the bickering between Sev and his Hawk. So much fun. Both have wit and sarcasim galore--if only they got along that well when Harry!hawk is human they could have a lot of fun.

    Oh well. This was wonderful and I'm looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: They could indeed and I'm so glad you liked this! And they may yet, once they both get over the shock that they were A) in the same room with each other without having a fight and B) actually like the other when they aren't fighting. 
Title: Hawk Speak 01 Apr 2009 3:28 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nicely done.

    I really like the banter between Harry/Hawk and Snape. Maybe Harry can show him the animagus book and he can become an unregistered one as well. LOL

    I meant to mention last chapter but forgot, I believe you made some interesting (and fun) choices in punishment for the three snakes.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he could, once he remembers who is, Snape gets over the heart attack he's going to have, and they locate the book in the library. 

    And then Severus could become a falcon or something too. 

    Glad you liked the punishments I gave Draco and co, it was fun dishing them up.

Title: Hawk Speak 01 Apr 2009 2:56 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Alright, I confess! I put off reading this story for a long time because I never really liked stories where Harry is somehow transformed into a creature and no one knows about it etc...But, once again, your writing abilities amaze me. You always seem to make the most outlandish things fit perfectly in your stories. I'm amazed! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

    I hope you feel better soon!

    Author's Response:

    So do I, believe me! I picked this up at work, and it nailed me all of a sudden.  I mean, i was fine, came home, thought about eating dinner, and got sick like that.  And then I got a call from work todays asking me if I could come in tomorrow to do story time with some underpriveleged autistic kids and I couldn't cause I'm still sick.  I felt really bad since I did it last year, but there was no way I wanted to go in and get those kids sick, and two other people were sick too.

    Anyway, I'm glad you like Wings, I wasn't too sure myself when I started posting it, but it grabbed me and now it won't let me go.  And so, here it is. 


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