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Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:57 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Le gasp!
    Freedom will fix Sev's heart! I know it

    Author's Response: Yes he will, and Sev will fix Freedom's too!  They just don't know it yet.
Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:32 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I hope so! Poor Severus! I loved when he named Freedom, it's a perfect name! And when Freedom was screaming insults and nobody but Snape could understand him. But then you made me feel like crying at the end. But it was a great read!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like his name and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. 

Title: Birds of A Feather 03 Apr 2009 1:07 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* loved the last bit. Though my favorite part was when Freedom/Harry started calling the Headmaster names.

    Excellent chapter and please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, harry has plenty to say to Dumbledore, doesn't he? LOL!

    Thanks and I just updated again. 

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I LOVE that Twixie could hear him! This just gets better and better. (I sure say that a lot, don't I? But it's true!)

    Author's Response:

    I figured that would make sense, since she's magical.  You do, but I don't mind!

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: justjoanjm (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it. I especially like how you're handling Harry in hawk form. I'd hate for them to solve things too quickly. I get that Harry!Hawk will remember what Severus goes through--I hope that Severus will remember the things the hawk tells him about his past life. (well, obviously not things that the bird says when he's on the verge of unconsciousness LOL)

    Author's Response: Yes, when harry regains some more memories in a future chapter, he will be able to share more of his past with Severus, such as what happened to him at the Dursleys. 
Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:19 pm
Reviewer: cookyc (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow I love this story can't wait to read the next chapters hurry!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just posted the next chapter. Enjoy!
Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 9:11 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Odd to say for something so . . . sad, but Beautiful Chapter. I think I love Sev more and more. Two broken creatures drawn together. Harry is nearly as broken as Sev when he's in his human form, and hides it just as well. They both wear masks--and can't see past the others'. I hope that this bonding will allow that once Freedom is Harry once agian.

    MOre soon please!
    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, they both are, and that's going to be the real magic trick in this story--if they can both heal each other once they finally see past each others' masks.  The bonding will go a long way towards easing their mutual animosity towards each other.  And you can see how well Poppy, Hagrid, and Harry take care of Severus in the next chapter.
Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 8:35 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus, I really hate Voldemort for doing that to him! It was so . . .unnecessary. But then, he's Voldemort.

    I felt so bad when Sev told Harry that he was the perfect spy because no one would care if he died that everyone he loved was gone. *sniff*

    I really hope Harry continues to be his friend after he changes back.

    That part with Albus and all was hysterical1 Loved it!

    Now to get help from Hagrid and presumabley Poppy as well.

    Author's Response:

    Yup, old Voldy is a snasty as they come. 

    Poor Sev still has a rather low opinion of himself. 

    teasing Albus is always fun!

    And yes, the next chappie is up!

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 5:51 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I certainly hope they can fix him - poor Severus, he really has been through the mill this time. Freedom's a great name - I especially hope he'll be able to live up to it when he's Harry again. I'm really glad you did more interaction between Severus and his hawk - those two fit together and Harry seems to be a much more settled version of himself now that he's a hawk and has no real memory of previously. His temper against Voldemort is my favourite so far. Nice logic for Twixie being able to understand Freedom!

    Oh, and brilliant scene between Snape and his Slytherins the previous chapter - even better than I'd hoped for! Ha! Draco gets to wear a white pinny!

    Author's Response:

    He has, the poor guy, and I didn't like doing that to him.  I don't like putting my characters in unnecessary pain, though Harry had to see what Severus goes through whenever he goes to answer that summons.  I'm glad you like Freedom's name, I almost couldn't think of one.  He is now that most of that awful pressure is off him and he can relax, well for awhile anyway.  Glad you liked my logic with Twixie.

    And isn't that so funny, Draco dressed like some housemaid.  he's lucky they didn't make him wear a cap too!

Title: Birds of A Feather 02 Apr 2009 5:12 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing!!! Loved it!! Fantastic!! :-) Especially loved bird shrieking at Dumbledore, and bird trying to help Sev. Much fun.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I liked those parts too, Harry is very interesting to write when he goes all protective over Sev! It's a funny role reversal.

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