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Reviews For Broken Wings
Freedom will fix Sev's heart! I know it Author's Response: Yes he will, and Sev will fix Freedom's too! They just don't know it yet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like his name and I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Excellent chapter and please update soon. Author's Response: Yes, harry has plenty to say to Dumbledore, doesn't he? LOL! Thanks and I just updated again.
Author's Response: I figured that would make sense, since she's magical. You do, but I don't mind!
Author's Response: Yes, when harry regains some more memories in a future chapter, he will be able to share more of his past with Severus, such as what happened to him at the Dursleys.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I just posted the next chapter. Enjoy!
MOre soon please! V. Author's Response: Yes, they both are, and that's going to be the real magic trick in this story--if they can both heal each other once they finally see past each others' masks. The bonding will go a long way towards easing their mutual animosity towards each other. And you can see how well Poppy, Hagrid, and Harry take care of Severus in the next chapter.
I felt so bad when Sev told Harry that he was the perfect spy because no one would care if he died that everyone he loved was gone. *sniff* I really hope Harry continues to be his friend after he changes back. That part with Albus and all was hysterical1 Loved it! Now to get help from Hagrid and presumabley Poppy as well. Author's Response: Yup, old Voldy is a snasty as they come. Poor Sev still has a rather low opinion of himself. teasing Albus is always fun! And yes, the next chappie is up!
Oh, and brilliant scene between Snape and his Slytherins the previous chapter - even better than I'd hoped for! Ha! Draco gets to wear a white pinny! Author's Response: He has, the poor guy, and I didn't like doing that to him. I don't like putting my characters in unnecessary pain, though Harry had to see what Severus goes through whenever he goes to answer that summons. I'm glad you like Freedom's name, I almost couldn't think of one. He is now that most of that awful pressure is off him and he can relax, well for awhile anyway. Glad you liked my logic with Twixie. And isn't that so funny, Draco dressed like some housemaid. he's lucky they didn't make him wear a cap too!
Author's Response: Thanks, I liked those parts too, Harry is very interesting to write when he goes all protective over Sev! It's a funny role reversal. |
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