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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Freedom's Flight 01 Mar 2015 11:40 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Too sweet. Loved it!

    --his
Title: Freedom's Flight 10 Jun 2009 4:31 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an excellent chapter. I was emotional along with Sev, feeling exactly how he felt before letting freedom go. Its amazing how he has grown attatched to Freedom and I like thier emotional and spiritual bond they possess with eachother, so much I actually dont want Harry to turn back. I cried when Freedom came back to Severus and Sev said You...came back. Amazing chapter!!!! By far my fave so far!!!!!! :)

    Author's Response: It really is an amazing bond and because of it, Severus will gain a valuable friend in harry.  I kind of wanted him to stay a hawk too, but . . .he's needed as a human wizard.  I loved that part. Sev really didn;t know what to expect and he was just so relieved and happy that Freedom returned.  Finally someone actually didn;t abandon him. 
Title: Freedom's Flight 26 May 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, freedom really enjoyed his freedom excuse the pun, glad he came back after having abit of fun, hagrid really gives great advice and he certainly knows about wild creatures better than sevvy

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he did and he waited long enough for it!

    Well, Hagrid ought to, since he is the gamekeeper and rehabilitated a hawk before.  But it was a learning experience for both of them, Freedom and Sev I mean.

Title: Freedom's Flight 06 May 2009 2:31 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Freedom's flight was wonderful. Lovely descriptions. Freedom is as good with the lure as HArry is with the snitch. I doubt Harry will ever be content on a broom again though.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response: Thank you, I loved writing this  part, since I adore watching hawks flying.  After this, no, nothing can compare with being a hawk and really flying.  He'll know the difference immediately.
Title: Freedom's Flight 04 May 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    What will happen when Freedom remembers Harry, and when Snape finds out?

    Author's Response: A lot will go on, as you'll see when you read future chapters.  Thank you!
Title: Freedom's Flight 08 Apr 2009 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying your story! Hawks are wonderful creatures, eagles too, for that matter.

    And when Freedom came back to Severus, that was just beautiful!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I love birds of prey, especially hawks.  Actually I love all animals, and usually have at least one in a story. 

    That was my favorite part, making Severus happy and restoring his faith in the bond they shared.  He really needs that.

Title: Freedom's Flight 08 Apr 2009 8:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    That was amazing!!!! I never read about a Hawk's flight from the hawk's point of view, but it was so fun and interesting to see what he got into, and his take on everything. Great chapter! i'm so glad that Freedom came back to Severus! Fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to get into the hawk's mind in order to write this, since it's so cool to imagine what it would be like to fly.  I wanted to have Sev be surprised at the end, and he was! 
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 10:25 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Much wonderfulness! I like how oblivious Freedom is to Sev's relief. :-)

    Author's Response: Yes, funny how that happens.  Well, hawks are kind of self-centered and so are teenagers sometimes, and right now Harry's both, so . . .he won't notice just how glad Sev is at his return until much later. 
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooh! i loved this! i can't wait to read more. keep up the fantastic work!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I've already posted the next chapter.
Title: Freedom's Flight 07 Apr 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was so great, now I'm crying! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's a tissue!

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