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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: Thanks and I know, I love Harry as Freedom too. But unfortunately, he does have to come back and be Harry again. There was a brief mention of Severus retaking the draft in this chapter, just a single line. There will be more mention of the side effects in the next one as Severus repeats the dose. No, the potion is important it enhances the bind between them, since they wouldn't be able to speak without it. Yes, that sounds like a good idea. Voldy getting his eyes clawed out by Freedom!
thanks =) Author's Response: Thanks! And more has just been added.
Aw, I'm so glad that Freedom came back. Nice chapter, and I 'm looking forward to seeing Freedom regaining his memory. I'm glad that Freedom had a twinge of guilt at the memories of calling Severus names. Author's Response: yeah, gross, isn't it? Freedoms' memory will almost all return two chapters from now. And yes, he will feel even more guilty once he has all his memories as Harry back as well as Freedom's. because then he'll know that Severus's role as a spy was taken to help protect him and seeing just how badly Sev was hurt by it is going to make Harry feel awful for awhile.
Please update soon--I'm enjoying your fic! -P.G. Author's Response: Yes, he will be, most likely, until he realizes that Harry will still be there for him. After all the bond works two ways, and Harry will also be remembering just who saved him and took care of him for all those weeks and that he actually knows the man behind the mask, the true Severus Snape. I 've just updated, and wait till you see what goes on at the staff dinner.
Wonderful! V Author's Response: I know, poor Sev, he always doubts whether or not things will work out, and then is shocked when they actually do. Thanks and just wait till you see what happens next!
Author's Response: Great, isn't it? I love to let him fly!
Author's Response: Thanks and he will, once he gets over the shock of disocvering that his best friend and familiar is Harry. It'll take a little while, but eventually Sev will come around and cherish Harry in both his forms. |
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