Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are a very good writer. Your style and sense of story is very enjoyable. The developing relationship between your characters is delightful. It almost makes me not want Harry to reveal himself, but you've already told us we have two weeks story-time before the angst is unveiled. One question...you mentioned that the potion had limits (downy feather?), yet you never mention retaking the potion or brewing more. Have they developed a bond due to the animagus angle or is it just not important enough to continue? How about Harry flying in as a hawk and changing to attack Voldy in the finale???

    Author's Response: Thanks and I know, I love Harry as Freedom too.  But unfortunately, he does have to come back and be Harry again.  There was a brief mention of Severus retaking the draft in this chapter, just a single line.  There will be more mention of the side effects in the next one as Severus repeats the dose.  No, the potion is important it enhances the bind between them, since they wouldn't be able to speak without it.  Yes, that sounds like a good idea.  Voldy getting his eyes clawed out by Freedom!
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 6:49 pm
Reviewer: guignou (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome ! can't wait for more !
    thanks =)

    Author's Response: Thanks! And more has just been added.
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Blood Pops! Ooh, poor Severus!

    Aw, I'm so glad that Freedom came back. Nice chapter, and I 'm looking forward to seeing Freedom regaining his memory. I'm glad that Freedom had a twinge of guilt at the memories of calling Severus names.

    Author's Response:

    yeah, gross, isn't it?

    Freedoms' memory will almost all return two chapters from now. 

    And yes, he will feel even more guilty once he has all his memories as Harry back as well as Freedom's.  because then he'll know that Severus's role as a spy was taken to help protect him and seeing just how badly Sev was hurt by it is going to make Harry feel awful for awhile.   

Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this was my favorite chapter by far! I loved the how you made the return of Freedom so glorious and how Sev had not expected him to come back. Sev's shock and grin were delightful. I'm a bit worried though, since you're hinting that it'll be two weeks before Sev finds out who his familiar really is (or at least, his familiar finds out who he really is). After seeing Sev so happy about having a familiar that doesn't leave him, I think he'll be devastated when he finds out his companion all along was Harry Potter. I don't want your Sev to get hurt!

    Please update soon--I'm enjoying your fic!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Yes, he will be, most likely, until he realizes that Harry will still be there for him.  After all the bond works two ways, and Harry will also be remembering just who saved him and took care of him for all those weeks and that he actually knows the man behind the mask, the true Severus Snape.  I 've just updated, and wait till you see what goes on at the staff dinner.
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! That was fun. I almost wanted to cry when first Sev thought Freedom had left him and then when he came back.

    Wonderful!
    V

    Author's Response:

    I know, poor Sev, he always doubts whether or not things will work out, and then is shocked when they actually do. 

    Thanks and just wait till you see what happens next!

Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 4:24 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, he is flying again! I liked this chapter very much! Mila

    Author's Response: Great, isn't it? I love to let him fly!
Title: Freedom's Flight 05 Apr 2009 2:55 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying this. I just hope that Severus learns to love the young boy as much as he loves Freedom.

    Author's Response: Thanks and he will, once he gets over the shock of disocvering that his best friend and familiar is Harry.  It'll take a little while, but eventually Sev will come around and cherish Harry in both his forms.

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5