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Reviews For Broken Wings
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Author's Response: You're right, I hate her too! She's so evil and sick. Freedom would have continued to scare her but Severus called him and he had to come in. She will be getting a lot worse than that, just wait and see!
Author's Response: Thanks. This was a really funny chapter. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Your time line is quite different here but then so are a lot of things. In canon, Umbridge became High Inquisitor before Christmas. And nor has Harry had any disturbing visions as he did in canon. I take it that the attack on Arthur Weasley did not happen? That this is an entirely AU fifth year. Enjoyable chapter. It's so nice to see Umbridge bested. Detestable woman! Lesley~ Author's Response: I would have to agree. It was certainly not the usual kind of thing. As for a catalyst, you'll see what finally triggers Harry's memories. yes, my time line is altered greatly. I've moved things around to fit my plotline. The visions will occur, just later on. Yes, the snake attack did happen, some things are the same, other things are different. I use canon when and where it fits with my story, but most things are explained eventually. I really hate Umbridge and I had fun doing terrible things to her. Thank you!
Author's Response: That was the highlight of the night, although don't discount the prophecy, it's important too! Umbridge has ALWAYS been trouble and yes, she will now be searching for a reason to make their lives miserable and maybe even do away with Freedom! Thank you.
Author's Response: I know . . .I've had thoughts along that line myself! You can see what Harry remembers right now!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved doing that! Freedom rules!
Author's Response: Thanks, more has been posted!
Author's Response: Yes, they could be in trouble later on. Revenge is a dish best served cold. I really detest that woman! I was happy to give her what she deserved. Thank you! |
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