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Title: Hawk For Dinner 02 Mar 2015 12:19 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Dolores and her just desserts! rofl! that was wonderful.

    --his
Title: Hawk For Dinner 10 Jun 2009 5:26 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Damn Umbridge needs to get bitch slapped, the whole dinner I was gritting my teeth at her snyed remarks and I wanted to slap her everytime she opened her mouth to shut it! I laughed hysterically when Freedom got startled and flew in her face, I would of continued to scare the crap out of her! LOL! Loved how she got humiliated at the end of dinner, tho she deserves way worse. Cant wait to see her get it in the end! :)

    Author's Response: You're right, I hate her too! She's so evil and sick.  Freedom would have continued to scare her but Severus called him and he had to come in.  She will be getting a lot worse than that, just wait and see!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 31 May 2009 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so funny! I love it! High five! I really like the way you right and your stories are very inventive too.

    Author's Response: Thanks.  This was a really funny chapter. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story! 
Title: Hawk For Dinner 06 May 2009 5:41 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I would say that a few people might have indigestion after that memorable dinner. I wonder if Umbridge herself might be the catalyst that has Harry's memory returning.

    Your time line is quite different here but then so are a lot of things. In canon, Umbridge became High Inquisitor before Christmas. And nor has Harry had any disturbing visions as he did in canon. I take it that the attack on Arthur Weasley did not happen? That this is an entirely AU fifth year.

    Enjoyable chapter. It's so nice to see Umbridge bested. Detestable woman!

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    I would have to agree.  It was certainly not the usual kind of thing.  As for a catalyst, you'll see what finally triggers Harry's memories.

    yes, my time line is altered greatly. I've moved things around to fit my plotline.  The visions will occur, just later on.  Yes, the snake attack did happen, some things are the same, other things are different. I use canon when and where it fits with my story, but most things are explained eventually.

    I really hate Umbridge and I had fun doing terrible things to her. 

    Thank you!

Title: Hawk For Dinner 09 Apr 2009 12:05 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved the dinner, and especially Umbridge upended in the strawberry trifle. But the woman is nothing but trouble and I have a feeling she really has it in for Freedom and Severus now.

    Author's Response: That was the highlight of the night, although don't discount the prophecy, it's important too! Umbridge has ALWAYS been trouble and yes, she will now be searching for a reason to make their lives miserable and maybe even do away with Freedom! Thank you.
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:25 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! freedom was great and so was Snape and trelawney! Umbridge . . .I just want to kill her! can't wait to see what happens next when Harry starts remembering!

    Author's Response: I know . . .I've had thoughts along that line myself! You can see what Harry remembers right now!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 2:58 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Sev wa sso clever and I loved seeing Umbridge get hers! Go Freedom!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I loved doing that! Freedom rules!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 10:56 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! Loved the scene with Umbridge falling on the table! Very funny! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks, more has been posted!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! Umbridge really deserved what happened to her, but now I worry for Severus and his hawk. Very good job on Umbridge, she was very in character, I disliked her perhaps more in your story than I did in the books. Thanks so much for the update! Great story so far!

    Author's Response: Yes, they could be in trouble later on.  Revenge is a dish best served cold.  I really detest that woman! I was happy to give her what she deserved.  Thank you!

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