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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, the fat old cow did and DESSERVED it!
Author's Response: She does and that prophecy will be important later on, as you'll see! You will, though she might not be in the best of moods when you do see her (Umbridge . . .cough, cough!) I enjoyed writing her.
Author's Response: Yeah, Sev can be such a snippy fellow! LOL! And the funniest thing was that she didn't even realize it, he was rather subtle, except with the ostrich comment. I love writing that scene and of course the last one! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have posted a new chapter.
A nice chapter, Mila Author's Response: Ah, now that is a question that will be answered much later in the story! Thank you!
1. Dive bombing Draco 2. All Toad Comments 3. The food explosion all over The "she-toad" herself. 4. Sybill laughing over Umbridge's food issues 5. Any and all comments made by Freedom. 6. Sev showing how much he cares for Freedom by checking him over, again, before going to bed.(as well as the fetching charm on his ID band) Loved it Loved it loved it! V. Author's Response: Thanks! I really loved writing all of it, although a few times I was like . . .should I really put that in there? And I did anyway. I love sticking it to the nasty Umbridge!
Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, though Sybill can be a bit bonkers, Severus would never be deliberately rude or cruel to her and he hates how Umbridge treats people! He knows how to behave with decorum like a gentleman.
I can't wait to the next chapter =o) Author's Response: Thanks! Well, Freedom might still have a few problems with his returning memories and Umbridge will be looking for an excuse to harm him. But Sev will do his best to protect him. |
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