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Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 1:36 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    SQEEEEEE! Umbridge gets her just desserts. HAHHAHA! You're amazing :]

    Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, the fat old cow did and DESSERVED  it!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 12:58 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello! I absolutely loved how you characterised Trelawney. Usually, she is just the batty divination teacher (and she's a fraud too). But here she has real Sight, and she is not above causing a little mischief... I hope we'll see her again :)

    Author's Response: She does and that prophecy will be important later on, as you'll see! You will, though she might not be in the best of moods when you do see her (Umbridge . . .cough, cough!) I enjoyed writing her.
Title: Hawk For Dinner 08 Apr 2009 12:14 am
Reviewer: villette1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so laughing all the way through the dinner. Severus was spot on with his in your face snarks at Umbry...

    Author's Response: Yeah, Sev can be such a snippy fellow! LOL! And the funniest thing was that she didn't even realize it, he was rather subtle, except with the ostrich comment.  I love writing that scene and of course the last one! Thanks!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 07 Apr 2009 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Dawna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant Chapter. I love this story. Please write more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I have posted a new chapter.
Title: Hawk For Dinner 07 Apr 2009 11:42 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder who is the second hawk.
    A nice chapter, Mila

    Author's Response: Ah, now that is a question that will be answered much later in the story! Thank you!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 07 Apr 2009 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    "I Loved it" points:
    1. Dive bombing Draco
    2. All Toad Comments
    3. The food explosion all over The "she-toad" herself.
    4. Sybill laughing over Umbridge's food issues
    5. Any and all comments made by Freedom.
    6. Sev showing how much he cares for Freedom by checking him over, again, before going to bed.(as well as the fetching charm on his ID band)

    Loved it Loved it loved it!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I really loved writing all of it, although a few times I was like . . .should I really put that in there? And I did anyway. I love sticking it to the nasty Umbridge!
Title: Hawk For Dinner 07 Apr 2009 10:51 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Fantastic! Your character portrayals are very nice. I like how Sev is (for him) kind to Sybill.

    Author's Response: Thanks.  Yes, though Sybill can be a bit bonkers, Severus would never be deliberately rude or cruel to her and he hates how Umbridge treats people!  He knows how to behave with decorum like a gentleman.
Title: Hawk For Dinner 07 Apr 2009 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Eržika (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The diner was wicked! But I hope that Freedom will not have major problems now, whan that pink cow is so afraid of him.
    I can't wait to the next chapter =o)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Well, Freedom might still have a few problems with his returning memories and Umbridge will be looking for an excuse to harm him. But Sev will do his best to protect him.

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