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Reviews For Broken Wings
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Author's Response: Yes, he doesn't want to hurt Severus, since he knows how much the man was hurt before. But it's also difficult to reconcile the new Snape with the old one like I said before, so Harry feels awkward and strange. Poor Sev doesn;t know what to think!
You answered most of my queries with this chapter, so I will shut up about how Broken Wings differs from canon. I will say that Freedom's new knowledge has not improved his feelings towards DD. Of course, he was out of sorts with DD in his 5th year but does Harry really think that DD would allow Umbridge to take over the school if there was anything he could do about it? Lesley~ Author's Response: That's true, he can't ignore what he remembers or hears anymore and it's bound to alter his perceptions. I always wondered in canon, why Umbridge was allowed such free reign, and it never was really answered. It always seemed like Fudge respected and was a bit afraid of Dumbledore, so he should have been able to convince the Minister to leave the school alone. I have an idea as to why that toad wa sput in charge, but you'll have to wait till the next chapter. A lot more will be revealed.
Author's Response: Well that should happen, but it will take some doing. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I know and maybe that will happen, soon as Snape gets over being betrayed.
He's going balmy worrying about his poor familiar who's going balmy worrying about how to tell his black protector/hated professor the truth. No matter how he does it, Severus is going to see it as a betrayal I fear. Even with the amnesia aspect. And the longer Freedom waits the more of a betrayal it'll feel to Sev. I always wondered why Albus allowed the Ministry and Umbridge so much leeway in his school. The school has it's own governing body so why allow the militia (for that's what they are in many ways) in to take over the school? I guess that's my own way of saying that I'm looking forward to finding out what Dumbledore's secret is. And of course everything else that you want to share with us next chapter. :-) Author's Response: You're right, it's goign to be hard for Severus to not see it like that, he'll be flipping out thinking that here's another one who has invaded his privacy and worse, he was the one who TOLD Harry about himself. You can find out the answer to that question next chapter which I've just posted.
Hmmm. I'm getting *really* curious about Dumbledore's secret. ::hunkering down to wait for next chapter's revelation:: Author's Response: he could do that, if he thought about it, but you know Harry...he's much more likely to lose it and just reveal himself unwittingly, and then everyone will be running for the hills. You can see Dumbles revelation now, since I've just posted it!
Author's Response: He is and you're right, Harry doesn't realize it . . .yet. A lot will be happening in the next few chapters though. So be prepared!
~Frosty Author's Response: You'll see! And you can also see Dumbledore's big secret, if you go and read the next chapter I've posted.
Author's Response: Yeah, I should have mentioned in the notes there was a reason why Ollie was back. You're right, they are needed together. Now you can check out the next chapter, which reveals a long kept secret. |
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