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Title: Prophecy of Lies 02 Mar 2015 2:58 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Goodness that was a step away from canon and it fits nicely, too! Well done!

    Poor Harry to find out this way... I'm glad he had Fawkes to comfort him and to chat with before hand.

    --his
Title: Prophecy of Lies 13 Feb 2010 5:33 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved Fawkes. Poor bird, being such a wonderful soul having to live with such a disillusioned one. I'm certain Dumbledore wasn't as bad when Fawkes imprinted on him.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I know what you mean.

    No, Albus wasn't as bad when Fawkes first chose him, but he has since tried to play a game that he has made mistakes at and hasn't been able to correct them. You'll see more of Fawkes later on.

Title: Prophecy of Lies 12 Jun 2009 7:52 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic chapter!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Now don;t forget to read the rest!
Title: Prophecy of Lies 07 May 2009 1:55 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, me! Well, there will never be any hope of Harry caring for DD again. Why did you ahve to make him culpable in the deaths of Lily and James, I wonder? Me thinks you do not like DD. I cannot see the advantage of making DD the bad guy, other than making Harry loathe him and therefore make him come to rely more on Severus.

    what did he hope to achieve by creating a false prophecy? It was obviously not the deaths of Lily and James. As you said, DD did not realise that the Potters and Longbottoms were due to give birth at the end of July. And there are horcruxes in your story, so it would have been pointless ambushing and killing Volde.

    Questions, questions, questions!

    Fawkes was great. I had a feeling he might relise that there was much more to Freedom.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Not necessarily, Harry has forgiven many things in the past.  This was to put a new twist on the old prophecy, and also to show that even the greatest mind can make a huge blunder.  This is DD's big guilty secret, instead of the Grindelwald conspiracy in DH.  The reason for the false prophecy was " but sought a way to buy time, he was moving too fast and we could not protect all the Muggles and Muggleborns or blood traitors he was targeting. You remember, you were reporting back a raid almost every night back then . . .and sometimes multiple ones in the same day or week. The Order could not handle all the attacks, nor protect everyone and people were dying every time I turned around . . .You nearly died when he found out you had been involved with Lily in your fifth year, Severus. . . He had always been obsessed with prophecy, even as a student. It was his weakness. He wanted to believe it was destiny foretold for him to rule Britain, or eventually the world. I thought if I played upon that weakness, exploited it, he would be made vulnerable . . .I wanted him thrown off balance, made afraid, that's why Sybill and I concocted the prophecy in the first place."

    At the time, DD did not know of the Horcruxes.  No one did.  That was Voldemort's failsafe.  DD only suspected after Voldemort's supposed demise and the rumors that he wasn't truly dead, the belief that the DE had that someday he would rise again.  It was only much later that Dumbledore gained proof that Voldemort had created Horcruxes.

    And even with the Horcruxes, destroying Voldy body will set him back for a good long time, it took him eleven years to come back from the last time.  That's the whole key to defeating him, destroying the body and then destroying the soul in the Horcruxes.   

    Fawkes was a sudden addition to this, he appeared and said I want to be in it too, and so he became an advisor to Freedom/Harry.

Title: Prophecy of Lies 05 May 2009 5:25 am
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) [Report This]
    whoa! that's one helluva big bag of secrets! Love this story... off to read more... :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you enjoy the rest of it!
Title: Prophecy of Lies 12 Apr 2009 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my Word!!!!

    I can't believe it! It was a fake prophecy all along?!
    I love this twist. It is so wonderful and original.
    Dumbledore is in really big trouble now. ;-}
    I always wondered why Dumbledore seemed to do little to nothing about Umbrige "taking over" the school. This really gives a little more background to it.
    So Severus took wizarding law huh? It would be interesting to know why. Did he need it because he was going to do/had done his mastery and he would be creating new potions and needed to know how to get copyrights? I would love to see that little bit of history expanded. ;-}

    I loved Fawkes, I hope that he will make another appearance in the story. ;-}

    About the sequels, I understand about having to finish one story before starting to work on another. I just wanted to ask. ;-}

    I hope you are having/had a good Easter.

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    Great, I'm glad you liked my twist, it came upon me all of a sudden. 

    Yes, Harry is very PO'd at Dumbles right now, and Albus better watch out. 

    Yes, Severus did take some law classes, you'll find out more about that a little later.  Fawkes might make a repeat appearance when necessary. 

    I had a great easter, thank you!  Hope you enjoy the next bit!

Title: Prophecy of Lies 12 Apr 2009 4:18 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sitting here with my eyes wide and my mouth hanging open....I didn't see that happening. So will Freedom tell Sev he's Harry?

    Author's Response: Well, not just yet.  There a few more things Freedom needs to learn about Severus himself and he still wants to try and help his friends beat Umbridge, but there will come a time when he has to reveal himself. In about three chapters, if I stick to my original plan. Hope you like the next part!
Title: Prophecy of Lies 12 Apr 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Yum, tasty bag of secrets - I certainly haven't heard that angle on the Prophecy before, very original! I LOVE Fawkes, I think he's my favourite so far. Is it wrong of me to sympathise with Dumbledore as much as Harry? Well, anyway, I'm sure that's just testament to your writing skills. Great last few chapters and I'm very glad I caught up again - can't wait for the next one though!

    Author's Response: Oh good, i wasn't sure if someone had done that before.  Fawkes popped up one day and said 'put me in here, Harry needs me' and I was like 'okay' and so here's the wise phoenix.  No, Dumbledore deserves a bit of sympathy too--he made a dreadful error in judgment, both past and present, and it may never be forgiven by the two it affects most--Snape and Harry.  I've just posted the Sev/Lily chapter, BTW!
Title: Prophecy of Lies 11 Apr 2009 6:58 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!! I really like how Fawkes knows that Freedom is Harry. Very, very cool.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I loved writing Fawkes, he was a last minute addition to the chapter that I think worked really well.  I'll need to go and review your chapter now!
Title: Prophecy of Lies 11 Apr 2009 4:50 pm
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! Poor Harry! The dark can be a scary place..but sometimes, when the light is shed, you find the darkness was actually better....I can't wait to see what happens next!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response: True, but well, you'll see how it all works out! Thanks for reading!

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