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Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 8:27 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was well worth the wait. I hope you had a good Easter. As always, bravo on your characterizations and writing style.

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, my Easter was wonderful!

    So glad you liked this and hope you like the next one I've posted too!

Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 7:23 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful chapter! I love how you intertwined Sev and Lily's past with your story! Poor Severus, he's lucky he's got Hagrid to talk to. And I think Harry finally understands just what his father put Snape through all those years ago.

    Author's Response: Yes, he does and it's quite a shock to him! Hagrid really is a great friend, he knows when to listen and when to talk.
Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 7:07 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally got around to reading this--it was wonderful! Poor Severus he really got the short end of the stick, huh? Loved this!

    Author's Response: Yes, but things will turn around soon!
Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the great chapter. You're doing a fine job. Really, aren't all stories AU if they're not Rawlings'.
    I love it.

    Author's Response: Yes, but I had some reviewers on another site complaining about how my story wasn't canon enough. Oh well, it is what it is and that's how I like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 1:54 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Freedom. Poor Snape. His story makes me sad.
    I'm way excited for the next chapter! woot!
    I hope Snape will see Harry as more than a copy of his father.

    Author's Response: Yes, Sev has had a hard life.  Eventually, Snape will, once he gets over being mad at Harry for hiding so long as his familiar.  The next chapter is up! And boy does Freedom have fun!
Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 12:45 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor, poor, confused birdy. He really should go divebomb Albus. Stupid meddling old prat.

    Author's Response: I agree! Or he could dive bomb Umbridge, LOL!
Title: Lily's Eyes 14 Apr 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: frostedmidnight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love the snape hagrid friendship! I can't wait to see harry back in his human form, and the interaction with snape!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response:

    me too, I'm so glad everyone seems to like it and doesn't think it's too OOC or strange.  It just seemed right to me.

    Harry and Snape will be confronting that particular hurdle in a few more chapters! But for now, see how Freedom deals with Umbridge!

Title: Lily's Eyes 13 Apr 2009 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    It always makes me sad to see how much Snape loved Lily, and she died not knowing how much in Canon. I love when Snape was forgiven before Lily died in Canon.

    I hope that Harry can find a way to change Snape's mind about him. Aw, can't wait to see how he decides to do that! ;)

    Author's Response:

    Me too, and I always wished for them to end up together!

    It'll be hard, but well . . .Harry has a stubborn streak just like Severus. 

Title: Lily's Eyes 13 Apr 2009 3:38 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks as always!
Title: Lily's Eyes 13 Apr 2009 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the modifications you've made to their "back story". Harry really is vicious in his Hawk form isn't he?

    Ooooh, Umbridge next? Does Freedom get away with tormenting the Toad? I hope so.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he can be, but hawks are predators and that's how they tend to react. 

    I really enjoyed writing Sev and Lily's story. 

    Well, you can see for yourself now that it's written.  It'll be fun!


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