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Title: Things Fall Apart 13 Feb 2010 8:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Shit shit shit

    Author's Response: Yeah you can say that again, LOL!
Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Jun 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOooooo I just wanna punch Umbridge in the face everytime I read her talk....LOL I want to see her die in the worst way possible, she is getting way out of hand!!! I agree with sev disciplining Freedom and he seemed to take it well or not but it was for the best and I hope he does realize that. I am so curious as to how Sev is going to react when he finds out Freedom is Harry, I hope its in the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    She is and don;t worry something REALLY BAD will happen to her soon!

    Freedom does know he deserved what Sev did to him, even if he hates it he knows Sev was fair. 

    Yes, the revelation is in the next chapter.  Hurry up and read it!! 

Title: Things Fall Apart 19 May 2009 12:27 am
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) [Report This]
    arghh! Umbridge is such a piece of work, and you've captured her essence very well in this. Nicely done.

    Author's Response: She is, so very evil and nasty.  I'm glad I made her evil enough. 
Title: Things Fall Apart 07 May 2009 2:15 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    How come Neville wasn't in detention with Ron and Hermione. He was given the same punishment as them after all.

    I can't believe that perfectionist Hermione was so foolish as to leave a piece of parchment of such importance loose in her bag instead of securing it away in a book, or disgusing the letter from a known felon as something innocuous.

    Umbridge definitely seems to be winning the war.

    Author's Response:

    Umbridge split them up.  The prefects were given detention together.  It wasn't mentioned because I was focusing more on Harry and Severus and Freedom's war with Umbridge. 

    Well, even Hermione can make mistakes and it was chance that the letter happened to fall out then. It happens. 

    She does, doesn't she?  But not for long.

Title: Things Fall Apart 19 Apr 2009 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear... Are we going to see more of Sirius in this fic? I imagine he's out of his head with worry right now. First Hagrid and now Sev? Yikes, I'm off to see what happens next.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: yes, Sirius will make an appearance much later, but he will here and Harry and severus will have a LONG talk with him and resolve some issues.  he is very concerned about Harry of course.  And yeah, Umbridge wants to clean house, so to speak, so it's off with their heads.
Title: Things Fall Apart 18 Apr 2009 8:48 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Grrr, damn that pink toad! She just makes me fume, the prejudiced creep >_<

    *sigh* Oh Sirius, if he didn't care so much about Harry (and visa-versa)... He’s so impossibly singe-minded sometimes. It was awfully rude, what he said about Severus’s parentage. Besides, I happen to be from the northeast and never picked up an accent, thank-you-very-much *sniffs snootily at Sirius*

    Hehe, anyways... I sure hope Severus can get out of this mess, and wonder just what Harry plans to do. Please post again when you can, I always love to read more!

    P.S. I really enjoyed these last few chapters, what with all the wonderfully sneaky things Freedom cooked up against Umbridge. I only wish he'd gotten away with more, hehe. Also, I loved Dumbledore's line: "Ah. Then you too have read Tolkien, Cornelius?" Gandalf; one of my fav characters from LoTR... :D

    P.P.S Just had a thought: Will Harry receive tutoring so he can catch up to all the classes he’s missed while being an Animagus?

    Author's Response:

    Umbridge is just plain N-A-S-T-Y.  Somebody ought to push her under a bus or something. 

    Yes, Sirius is still very much as prejudiced as he was during school, he hasn't quite grown-up yet.  But he will try, eventually, after Harry speaks to him. 

    I have just updated, so you can read what's happened next!

    Yeah freedom and I had FUN thinking up awful things to do to Umbridge the disgusting toad!

    Gandalf is one of mine too, along with Aragorn and Eowyn. 

    That's something that will be addressed eventually, because, yes, he will need to make up what he's missed so he can take his OWLS.

Title: Things Fall Apart 18 Apr 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear! Things definitely ARE falling apart, aren't they?

    Author's Response: Yes, they sure are!
Title: Things Fall Apart 18 Apr 2009 4:25 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!! I especially liked the bit where Severus disciplines Freedom, and Freedom (sort of) accepts it. It's time Harry learned to control his impulsiveness, especially considering that's what got him in this fix in the first place.

    Author's Response: It is and Severus knows it (even if he doesn't know it's Harry) and now Harry knows it too! He might not enjoy Sev's discipline but even he has to admit that it was fair and deserved.  And he will try and learn from it.
Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Apr 2009 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow1 I loved the way Freedom tried to help the DA and everything. I also liked how Sev comforted Hagrid. brilliant! But I hope nothing bad happens to Severus.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It's too bad he didn't succeed though! I'm glad you liked Severus's comfort, he really felt bad about what happened to poor Hagrid.  As for Severus, read the next chapter!
Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Apr 2009 7:25 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Things are certainly getting interesting at Hogwarts! Are you going to include the twins? They're a major part of the "fight" agaist Umbridge in canon.
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and Umbridge confrontation with Snape...and Harry's reaction too :)

    Author's Response: Yes, they will be showing up eventually.  The next one has been posted and it's very intense! Lots of Umbridge threatening Snape and Harry too!

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