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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Apr 2009 1:13 am
Reviewer: skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I am on tenterhooks about what Harry is going to do. I want to urge him to 'fess up before he makes it worse... You are SO great about updating regularly, it's fantastic to follow your stories!

    One quick note, you wrote "fulsade", I think that you mean "fusillade".

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I really try hard not to make people wait while they're reading, since it kind of spoils the flow of the story. 

    Yes, i corrected that, thanks!

Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Apr 2009 12:59 am
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Oh no no no no no! You can't sack Snape!!! I loved your scene with dumbles, it was very well written. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response:

    Now would I do that?  Of course not!

    But Umbridge might.

    Glad you liked dumbles exit, Fawkes enjoyed it too!

Title: Things Fall Apart 17 Apr 2009 12:51 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! Maybe Severus will grab Freedom and leave Hogwarts :) Mila

    Author's Response: Now there's an idea, too bad both of them would never do it!

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