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Title: Severus's Bane 02 Mar 2015 8:39 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    --sniff--

    --his
Title: Severus's Bane 28 May 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    poor sev and harry, i hope they can solve this as they need each other, come on sev just listen to harry and harry speak with sev

    Author's Response: Yes, all they need is to sit down and just TALK to each other.  Of course, they're both stubborn men so it's not going to happen anytime soon.
Title: Severus's Bane 07 May 2009 2:51 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sad. Beautifully witten.

    Author's Response: Yes, Severus's temper nearly ruins everything here.  Thanks!
Title: Severus's Bane 22 Apr 2009 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, I'll admit it. I just got all teary over this chapter (at work, no less). And I am not a fuzzy-wuzzy, tear-up at any little thing kind of reader. I am at the mercy of this story.

    Author's Response: Hey, that's quite a compliment! Thank you!
Title: Severus's Bane 21 Apr 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, man. If they could just calm down and TALK to one another! They've both got such tempers. Loving it! :-)

    Author's Response: Yes and that's their whole problem.  They're letting their tempers talk for them.  But eventually they'll calm down.
Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Amazing. What emotions and problem! Poor Harry! Poor Severus! The only one happy about all of this might be Umbridge. Yuk! Poor guys. They will have to get through a lot of pain maybe to get close to each other again, and I fear for the time Harry has to spend alone with Umbridge. He must control himself or he will get his wand snapped! Severus needs to help him - not only controlling himself but making up all his missed work. Poor boy. how is e going to get through the rest of the term?

    Author's Response: I know, it's really sad how each needs the other and yet they allow their tempers to get in the way.  Yes, I'd say Umbridge is celebrating right now . . .the evil thing!  Yes, definitely Harry needs to cultivate some self-control, hopefully he can do it.  Sev does need to help him, but first he has to see that Harry didn't betray him and that the kid still needs him.  As for the rest of the term, he needs some help before he collapses, as you'll see next chapter.
Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 8:00 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor Severus! Poor Harry! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! More is now up!
Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 7:48 am
Reviewer: SageKiller (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG sooooo good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Don't keep them fighting too long, it's too sad!

    Author's Response: I know, and I'll try not to, but they can't resolve things too quickly.  Thanks!
Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    You captured the emotion very well - I needed tissue to wipe my eyes...

    Author's Response:

    Wow! Thanks! Hope you enjoy the next one!

Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 5:04 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    .....I am so not crying. I am so not crying.
    DAMN YOU! I'M CRYING!
    :[ poor Severus! Poor Harry!. eep!

    Author's Response: Aww! I know this was a really emotional chapter.  The next one will be too, but in a more gradual way.  Thanks for reading as always!

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