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Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 1:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh how did I miss this chapter? Sorry for that. Oh my. Will Snape and Harry ever be able to reconcile. So sad.

    What a bitch that Umbridge is. What a cow. I'd love to see her be turned into her true form. Oh excuse me cows. You are much better than that pink bitch.

    How was your birthday. You certainly managed to write a very moving chapter.

    Oh, how do you write so fast. Amazing

    Author's Response:

    Uh, it'll take a little time, I'd imagine.  But I would bet on it.

    She is truly a terrible evil woman.  And she gets worse the next chapter. 

    My birthday was great and thanks for asking!

    Uh, I don't know.  I just do.

    I've posted the next one BTW!

Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have tears in my eyes...our poor boys...i hope you heal them soon

    Author's Response: I will but in a few chapters.  First they have to endure a bit of anguish and turmoil, but they will eventually be together again. 
Title: Severus's Bane 20 Apr 2009 12:16 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting way to mix in that cockroach jar, I definitely caught the reference to OoTP! Yes, very symbolic too… This was so sad! Heartbreaking actually, I just about needed a tissue.

    I feel bad for them both. Severus, for his hurt and feelings of betrayal, and Harry, whom clearly is lost and full of regret. Such painful emotions... I blame Umbridge! If Harry wasn't put under such pressure he may have had time to better reveal himself to Sev and the hurt wouldn't be so raw. Off the Owlry with her I say! She can go splat in a pile of bird-droppings, tehe.

    These next few days are going to be hell for them both, in their own ways. Best of luck to them, and I'll cross all my fingers and toes that they may someday mend their friendship :) I wonder how Ron and Hermione (plus others) will take the news of Harry’s return?

    Author's Response:

    I had to put that in there, the cockroach jar was one of the things that made me shiver when Snape threw it in OOTP, because it showed just how much his self-control had disintegrated. 

    I do too, they are both so very wounded and yes, it is Umbridge's fault for doing all she can to make their lives miserable. 

    They will but there will be a rainbow eventually, I'm not one for long drawn out angst.  You'll see how they take it next chappie, which is up now!

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! They HAVE to be able to fix this1 Don't make them go back to being enemies again, please! I love this!

    Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see what happens soon!
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 8:29 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww, both of them need to be locked down in the dungeon for a weekend without their wands. They both need each other so much.

    Author's Response: Yup that's what they need, all right! Thanks for R &R ing!
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh goodness, that's so sad! I really thought the scene where Sev and Harry talk was very accurately done. They are both hurting so much that they can't really reason out what the other is feeling. I think a trip to Hagrid's would do them some good. Hagrid is a friend to them both and would probably make a good mediator in this situation.

    I wonder how much Harry will tell Ron and Hermione about where he's been and what happened...

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, and that's very true, neither one can speak rationally at this point.  It would, but first they have to cool down and watch out for Umbridge.

    Harry will try and keep some things secret for a time, but the best laid plans . . .well, you'll see what happens next chapter.

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, I feel so bad for them both. I hope they can forgive each other and fix their friendship and kill Umbridge. Beautiful chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'd like for her to die too!
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: chris (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow I hope they become friends again.I have never seen Snape show emotion.I realllllllllllly hope every thing works out,Dumbledor found,Snape and Harry friends,Umbridge fired I give it a10

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! Snape does lose control on occasion, though he is a master at suppressing emotions, he has to be in order to survive His Darkness.  Dumbledore will return eventually and Sev and Harry should mend their differences and Umbridge will get hers, trust me!
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sad Day! This is a sad chapter, but I know that it had to happen. Love it though Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it did.  But maybe things will get better eventually . . .

    Thanks!

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 5:00 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, this made me want to cry. Poor Harry, and poor Severus too. I really hope they can work it out between them without anything too drastic happening (!) I'm curious about how Hermione and Ron will react now that Harry's back - what Harry will tell them and, more importantly, how Harry and Severus will react to each other in public. Thanks so much for updating so quickly!

    Author's Response: I know, I was nearly crying myself writing this.  I hate torturing them, but unfortunately they must go through this before mending their friendship, because then it will be stronger.  Hope that makes sense. You'll see Ron and Mione's reaction enxt chapter as well as the way Haryr and Sev behave towards each other.

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