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Reviews For Broken Wings
What a bitch that Umbridge is. What a cow. I'd love to see her be turned into her true form. Oh excuse me cows. You are much better than that pink bitch. How was your birthday. You certainly managed to write a very moving chapter. Oh, how do you write so fast. Amazing Author's Response: Uh, it'll take a little time, I'd imagine. But I would bet on it. She is truly a terrible evil woman. And she gets worse the next chapter. My birthday was great and thanks for asking! Uh, I don't know. I just do. I've posted the next one BTW!
Author's Response: I will but in a few chapters. First they have to endure a bit of anguish and turmoil, but they will eventually be together again.
I feel bad for them both. Severus, for his hurt and feelings of betrayal, and Harry, whom clearly is lost and full of regret. Such painful emotions... I blame Umbridge! If Harry wasn't put under such pressure he may have had time to better reveal himself to Sev and the hurt wouldn't be so raw. Off the Owlry with her I say! She can go splat in a pile of bird-droppings, tehe. These next few days are going to be hell for them both, in their own ways. Best of luck to them, and I'll cross all my fingers and toes that they may someday mend their friendship :) I wonder how Ron and Hermione (plus others) will take the news of Harry’s return? Author's Response: I had to put that in there, the cockroach jar was one of the things that made me shiver when Snape threw it in OOTP, because it showed just how much his self-control had disintegrated. I do too, they are both so very wounded and yes, it is Umbridge's fault for doing all she can to make their lives miserable. They will but there will be a rainbow eventually, I'm not one for long drawn out angst. You'll see how they take it next chappie, which is up now!
Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see what happens soon!
Author's Response: Yup that's what they need, all right! Thanks for R &R ing!
I wonder how much Harry will tell Ron and Hermione about where he's been and what happened... -P.G. Author's Response: Yes, and that's very true, neither one can speak rationally at this point. It would, but first they have to cool down and watch out for Umbridge. Harry will try and keep some things secret for a time, but the best laid plans . . .well, you'll see what happens next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'd like for her to die too!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Snape does lose control on occasion, though he is a master at suppressing emotions, he has to be in order to survive His Darkness. Dumbledore will return eventually and Sev and Harry should mend their differences and Umbridge will get hers, trust me!
Author's Response: Yes, it did. But maybe things will get better eventually . . . Thanks!
Author's Response: I know, I was nearly crying myself writing this. I hate torturing them, but unfortunately they must go through this before mending their friendship, because then it will be stronger. Hope that makes sense. You'll see Ron and Mione's reaction enxt chapter as well as the way Haryr and Sev behave towards each other. |
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