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Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 4:45 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to admit that actually went a little smoother than I had dreaded. Still bad, but at least Sev let him speak a little.

    Oh, the poor guys. This line kicked me in the gut - "But Snape's words cut him sharply, lashing his fragile self-esteem like a whip."

    And now he has to go to Gryffie tower and see his friends while he's still reeling from that encounter? Yikes.

    Author's Response:

    yes, Sev did manage to control himself that much at least.  But not enough to avoid hurting the poor kid with his sharp tongue.

    But then that's why his temper is Severus's greatest bane, because of the things he does when he's angry.

    Poor Harry! Poor Sev too!

    Yes, he'll go to the tower now and you can see what happens after it, plus Umbridge's detention.

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 4:45 pm
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry, and poor Snape!! I feel the need to give them both hugs! and then beat them! And I also feel a strong urge to sic a mob with torches and pitch forks after toady! Wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see if Harry and Sev make nice!

    Author's Response:

    Funny, that was MY reaction too! LOL! yes, I want to do that too.  Or how about a mob of birds?? Oooh . . .maybe that's how I'll finish her off!!

    Thanks and you can see the next chapter now!

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 4:26 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Gee--just rip my heart out, Why don't you!

    Wonderfully written!
    V

    Author's Response:

    Okay . . .sorry!

    I know this was a tough one to read and write too!

    Hope the next one doesn't tear out your poor heart so much.

Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 3:37 pm
Reviewer: hieijunkie (Signed) [Report This]
    awww. this chapter almost made me cry! I hope things will change soon. Though someone seriously needs to do something about that toad! Can't wait till the next chappie comes out! ^__^

    Author's Response: Yes it was really sad! Someone will do something about her, give it time! The next one's here!
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 3:30 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's one of my favourite chapters so far ! I really loved Harry and Snape's confrontation, and how Severus falls back into his old pattern of behaviour (and he actually hurts himself as much as Harry).
    I also loved the reference to canon : Snape throws a jar of cockroaches after the pensive incident in OotP, and he trows it here too...

    Author's Response: Yes, sadly Sev has gone backwards a bit with his temper and he does hurt himself dreadfully.  Yes, I really liked that part in canon, which is why I had him do it here too, but thankfully not at poor Harry.
Title: Severus's Bane 19 Apr 2009 2:17 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    aw that was so sad and emotional!! i loved it!!!! well done. the angst was very open and honest! u wrote the moment between sev and harry perfectly! cant wait til the next chapter

    Author's Response: Thanks, i really tried hard not to go overboard and have them totally trash each other.  The next one's up now!

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