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Reviews For Broken Wings
Oh, the poor guys. This line kicked me in the gut - "But Snape's words cut him sharply, lashing his fragile self-esteem like a whip." And now he has to go to Gryffie tower and see his friends while he's still reeling from that encounter? Yikes. Author's Response: yes, Sev did manage to control himself that much at least. But not enough to avoid hurting the poor kid with his sharp tongue. But then that's why his temper is Severus's greatest bane, because of the things he does when he's angry. Poor Harry! Poor Sev too! Yes, he'll go to the tower now and you can see what happens after it, plus Umbridge's detention.
Author's Response: Funny, that was MY reaction too! LOL! yes, I want to do that too. Or how about a mob of birds?? Oooh . . .maybe that's how I'll finish her off!! Thanks and you can see the next chapter now!
Wonderfully written! V Author's Response: Okay . . .sorry! I know this was a tough one to read and write too! Hope the next one doesn't tear out your poor heart so much.
Author's Response: Yes it was really sad! Someone will do something about her, give it time! The next one's here!
I also loved the reference to canon : Snape throws a jar of cockroaches after the pensive incident in OotP, and he trows it here too... Author's Response: Yes, sadly Sev has gone backwards a bit with his temper and he does hurt himself dreadfully. Yes, I really liked that part in canon, which is why I had him do it here too, but thankfully not at poor Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks, i really tried hard not to go overboard and have them totally trash each other. The next one's up now! |
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