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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: Because he's Sev, of course! But he'll come round eventually, with a little help from someone he trusts.
Author's Response: Well, he's kind of distracted right now, so just be patient, he'll read it!
Author's Response: He would, most likely. Right now he is at the lowest point he has ever been in. Right where Umbridge wants him. But things will start to get better after awhile. Once Severus stops being an idiot.
I like that time slips by at a decent pace; something big doesn't have to happen every day. The relationship seems more realistic because although we can observe that Harry and Sev think about each other every day, they are both busy and the actions they take are spaced out over several days. Author's Response: Yes, I know. The talk with Hagrid is one of the major turning points here for Severus. Good, I didn't want to rush it so much and have people going--but what the heck just happened? The progression of days is also useful so you can see Harry and his reactions to his classmates and Umbridge and all that dreadful homework--the pressure is really getting to him. And in a different way, Sev is slowly regaining his concern over his former familiar. I have posted the next chapter, by the way! Thank you!
Author's Response: You'll see! Umbridge will be getting hers and as for Hagrid and Sev . . .hurry and read all about it!
Author's Response: She is that all right! You're right about Hermione, Ron has never been much help when it comes to schoolwork. There is, that cuff is BAD news!
Author's Response: It's rough for both of them! More is now up!
Author's Response: Uh, it depends on what happens with Harry and the magic cuff. He will be discovering that soon and yes, it would be an interestinf scenario. I love a protective Snape!
Author's Response: And well you should be, though Harry's emotional state is important too, since it leads him to do something he'll regret.
I hope Hagrid has a Bludger handy--or at least that letter pops out and Severus actually *reads* the darned thing! Sheesh. Umbridge has just *got* to get hers by the end of this! ::begging puppy dog eyes:: Author's Response: Thanks. yeah, he might need one, give how stubborn Snape is, LOL! Oh she WILL! Looking forward to that! |
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