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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: Turmoil 17 Jul 2009 9:07 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev why do you have to be so damn stubborn!!! LOL!!! Put your past aside and trust your gut instincts! You know you had a bond like no other with freedom regardless of whom he turned out to be.

    Author's Response: Because he's Sev, of course! But he'll come round eventually, with a little help from someone he trusts.
Title: Turmoil 06 Jun 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Just read the damn letter! Sorry for that but he's being useless!

    Author's Response: Well, he's kind of distracted  right now, so just be patient, he'll read it!
Title: Turmoil 07 May 2009 3:46 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    If Harry could transform, I bet he would just fly off and live as a hawk. I think I would. He no longer has Severus, his life is hell and he has nothing but the Dursleys to look forward to after he fails his exams. That's if he doesn't collapse in a heap from overwork.

    Author's Response: He would, most likely.  Right now he is at the lowest point he has ever been in.  Right where Umbridge wants him.  But things will start to get better after awhile.  Once Severus stops being an idiot.
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I know it's just a letter, but this cliffhanger is driving me crazy. And thank goodness Sev is going to talk to Hagrid-- I can't wait!
    I like that time slips by at a decent pace; something big doesn't have to happen every day. The relationship seems more realistic because although we can observe that Harry and Sev think about each other every day, they are both busy and the actions they take are spaced out over several days.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know.  The talk with Hagrid is one of the major turning points here for Severus.

    Good, I didn't want to rush it so much and have people going--but what the heck just happened?

    The progression of days is also useful so you can see Harry and his reactions to his classmates and Umbridge and all that dreadful homework--the pressure is really getting to him.

    And in a different way, Sev is slowly regaining his concern over his former familiar.

    I have posted the next chapter, by the way! Thank you!

Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 6:29 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    That horrible woman1 She had no right to do that to harry! Evil witch! She needs to die in a big way! And Severus has to read the letter and help harry before he loses it. I hope Hagrid can shake some sense into him.

    Author's Response: You'll see! Umbridge will be getting hers and as for Hagrid and Sev . . .hurry and read all about it!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 10:21 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Umbridge is such a .... ! Harry is lucky to have Hermione, Ron is not helpful at all. Oh, and I bet there is more than Umbridge told Harry about the animagus-inhibitor! Something wicked. Is it a bug? Mila

    Author's Response: She is that all right! You're right about Hermione, Ron has never been much help when it comes to schoolwork.  There is, that cuff is BAD news!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 8:22 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Poor Severus! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: It's rough for both of them! More is now up!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 7:59 am
Reviewer: SageKiller (Signed) [Report This]
    Umbridge is so evil! Is she going to get worse or better? I hope Snape finally realizes how awesome Harry is soon. It would be interesting to see Snape nurse Harry back to health again, only this time both as humans.

    Author's Response: Uh, it depends on what happens with Harry and the magic cuff.  He will be discovering that soon and yes, it would be an interestinf scenario. I love a protective Snape!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 7:19 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm more worried about that blasted binding cuff and what it's really doing to Harry...

    Author's Response: And well you should be, though Harry's emotional state is important too, since it leads him to do something he'll regret.
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 5:58 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Aah, angst! Lovely, lovely angst...! Very well done. Heh--I think I saw a typo somewhere, but I was so caught up in the story it barely registered! That's *really* good.

    I hope Hagrid has a Bludger handy--or at least that letter pops out and Severus actually *reads* the darned thing! Sheesh.

    Umbridge has just *got* to get hers by the end of this! ::begging puppy dog eyes::

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.

    yeah, he might need one, give how stubborn Snape is, LOL!

    Oh she WILL! Looking forward to that!


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