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Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    If anyone can make Severus change his mind, it’s Hagrid. He’s a good soul and people don’t give him enough credit, plus he’s one of the few Sev can call ‘friend‘. If Sev would just read that letter, it’d give him the final push to attempt things over with Harry…

    Man, Umbridge is such a sadist! I wish she’d be put in Azkaban for child abuse. And where does she get off blabbing Harry’s secret to everyone?! Completely inappropriate! *grr* Poor Harry… Not only is he up to his ears in schoolwork, having to endure torture sessions with the ‘toad from hell’, and had his freedom (pun not intended) to fly taken away, but now this is out. No peace I tell ya!

    And speaking of that band: something tells me that isn't legal to use against minors, and if it isn’t it should be! Sounds awful to have to wear it...

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's true.  Hagrid is a good man and Sev's friend and he trusts him.  The letter will provide the final push as you'll see next chapter!

    She needs to be and perhaps that will happen.  I know, the kid never seems to catch a break, except maybe now he will, once Severus is on his side.

    The cuff is something very bad, you'll find out more in a future chapter. Nothing from that woman is a good thing ever.

    And the next one's up!

Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: Ehann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just mainlined this whole story, I really like it!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! That bracelet makes me nervous. That toad probably cursed it or something. I hope that Severus will stop being stubborn and reads that letter. Poor Harry. All he wants is someone to care about him. I just wanted to cry at Snape snubbing him.

    I'm looking forward to your next chapter to find out what happens. I have a feeling that I'm going to need even more tissues for it!

    Author's Response:

    It is a very nasty object, you'll see how nasty very soon!

    I know, Severus needs to get his act together and help the kid.

    You may, most likely!

    Thanks, as always!

Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    AH!
    I chose all of the above for the next chapter, adding in a Sev-saves-Harry moment. Because those just make me happy :]

    Author's Response: me too! And you never know! hurry and read the next chapter!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 1:38 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. The suspense is building! Poor Harry! He's practically working himself to death! But it should be doable. Doesn't he know that he doesn't have to actually read stuff - that he can just skim and do the homework without reading the books? He should be able to copy Hermione's notes too, she must have some prepared for every essay. Also, he could try and just write the essays shorter than usual. Still acceptable, but shorter. finally, he needs to stop napping. It will make him overly tired during the day - getting a good night's sleep will enable him to use Binn's class as a time to do homework. I hope that Severus will step in and help him manage himself better. I hope that Hagrid will say something to Severus about how Umbridge was the one who told everyone, or that Severus will read Harry's letter. Wow, great development and I can't wait to read and see what happens next! Awesome work!

    Author's Response: Those are all really valid points to help Harry finish all that homework on time and just what I would have suggested to him myself as a former teacher. Sleep, especially, is essential, something which a lot of kids today don;t realize.  Severus does need to come and help him, he knows all those tips too.  When Hagrid talks with Severus, he will start to realize he is wrong and the letter is key also.  Hope you enjoy the next part! Thanks for reading, Jan!
Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 1:26 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Umbridge needs to die, I've said it before. I hope Severus listens to Hagrid and reads the letter and helps Harry.

    Author's Response:

    yes and she will!

    Give him a chance, he'll get around to it!

Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Loving it! That evil HAG!! GRRRRRR!!! I really love the moment in class when Harry realizes Snape is ignoring him. Poor Harry.

    Author's Response:

    That was one of the ones where I thought AWWW as I was writing it, because I felt so bad for the kid!

    Things will get better soon!

Title: Turmoil 22 Apr 2009 12:06 am
Reviewer: FrostedMidnight (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Harry! I have a feeling the braclet is most defininantly illegal! Yes, birds shall swoop in and eat the toad!(gleeful imaginings) Hagrid has his work cut out for him, I hope he manages to talk some sense into our dear potions master's thick head! I can't wait to see how it all works out!
    ~Frosty

    Author's Response:

    You'd be right--the bracelet is so bad! You'll find out more soon!

    That's aneat image and very appropriate!

    Hagrid can do it, if anyone can!

Title: Turmoil 21 Apr 2009 11:43 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I just had to review. I liked the long chapter, but seriously? You ended it there? That is so not fair! :) sigh, maybe an update tomorrow? I'll be finished with exam by night it'll be a nice ending to my term. lol. :D

    Author's Response:

    I know, but . . .I really had to go to sleep.  :)

    Yes, I should have the next one posted then.

    Hope all went well with exams!

Title: Turmoil 21 Apr 2009 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man, I feel so bad for Harry. Nothing is worse than being ignored. Severus just doesn't know how to deal with the situation though and he's doing what he needs to do to try and cope. It makes me sad that they both feel so lonely. I hope they can get something worked out in the next chapter.

    I'm very curious about the cuff--is it making Harry's punishments worse than they normally would be? I have a feeling it's something even fouler than the blood quill and hope that Harry will speak up about it sometime soon.

    Great chapter--I hope to read more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I agree with that.  being ignored is the worst.

    Severus doesn't know how to fix things, he's very awkward, much like Harry. 

    You'd be right about the cuff, it is a nasty item and more will be revealed about it soon. It is quite wicked and evil, but then it was from Umbridge the Awful.


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