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Reviews For Broken Wings
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Author's Response: She does and she will! Just wait and see. It is a bad potion and hopefully Sev can reach Harry in time.
Author's Response: yes, he will. It was good that Severus figured it out and found him in time, and now they can have a talk and hopefully resolve some things!
Author's Response: Yes, he is. I kind of picture him to be like Sam in LOTR, he knws what's what, even if he isn't a brilliant wizard and he knows the most important things ar eones that can't be bought--friendship, love, and trust. If Severus hadn't found the letter, he might have done just what you said. Glad you enjoyed the progression of days and the next one;s just been posted, hope you like it! Thanks, Jen!
Very interesting developments, though. I hope Sev sees the cuff soon, because that is just bad news!!! Author's Response: I know, but . . .I had to end it somewhere. Severus will see the cuff in the next chapter, it is very bad and hopefully you enjoy the confrontation.
Author's Response: I've always seen him as a gentle perosn, one who cares deeply for people, especially those who seem lost or alone, like Snape. It always touched me that he defended Snape to Harry, Ron, & Hermione when they all thought he was evil during the Sorcerer' Stone. McGonagall is preoccupied with her duties as Deputy Headmistress and she has always seemed to allow her House to make their own decisions up to a point and yes, she should have checked up on Harry and Umbridge as well. They both needed to be watched. The cuff will be brought to someone's attention very soon. Harry has managed to keep the cuff hidden under the sleeve of his robe, which is always a little long and hangs over his hand slightly. I would think he has taken great pains to hide it and probably waits for the shower. he does scratch at it, but where no one can see, like beneath a desk. As for if it would itch more with the Stimulant Draft . .. I don't know. I never thought about it. Harry is messed up partially due to the Stimulant Draft and partly for another reason which will be known next chapter. Snape will see something very unexpected in Harry when he finally confronts him. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, I have just updated.
a) what does the silver manacle really do? b) will he becom addicted to the potion? c) who will survive their upcoming confrontation? d) who killed Umbridge? I am looking forward to read the answers! Author's Response: Hi! Let's see if I can answer some of those questions and thanks for reading! a) the silver manacle is a very BAD item, more will be explained about it later! b) No, because Severus won't be letting him take any more of it. You can't become addicted to one dose. c) no one dies, but things do get a little . . .hot d) she WILL be dying, maybe by Sev, maybe someone else, you'll find out!
*just had to put the pep talk in* Okay, I loved the chapter! Hagrid was awesome! Poor Harry, please update soon! Author's Response: It's good one too! Thanks and I have! |
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