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Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 02 Mar 2015 9:52 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Not nice to end it there! I at least can move on to next chapter...! lol.

    --his
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 21 Apr 2014 8:15 pm
Reviewer: nirehtyls (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hurt/comfort =
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Jul 2009 4:32 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter. That potion sounds bad, I hope that Sev takes Hagrid's advice and listens to the letter and helps Harry. Umbridge needs to die!!

    Author's Response: She does and she will! Just wait and see.  It is a bad potion and hopefully Sev can reach Harry in time. 
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 24 Apr 2009 7:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOw. What a standoff! Poor Harry, I suppose that he will learn his lesson about that particular draft. I am glad that he was caught before he got addicted and used to taking it all of the time, but apparently he did not escape the after effects. What a mess! Hooray for Snape knowing where to find him! Great chapter and great story development! I am enjoying it greatly! Thank you for sharing it with us!

    Author's Response: yes, he will.  It was good that Severus figured it out and found him in time, and now they can have a talk and hopefully resolve some things!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I definitely like your Hagrid - he's so down to earth and sensible! Yay! Thank goodness Snape found Harry's letter, I was really worried that Severus would go and say something else awful to Harry before he read it, but thank you for laying my fears to rest :) Brilliant build up with the Stimulant Potion - it was written at exactly the right pace! I can't wait to read the 'discussion' chapter - please update soon! I wonder what Harry's magic stirring meant...

    Author's Response: Yes, he is. I kind of picture him to be like Sam in LOTR, he knws what's what, even if he isn't a brilliant wizard and he knows the most important things ar eones that can't be bought--friendship, love, and trust.  If Severus hadn't found the letter, he might have done just what you said.  Glad you enjoyed the progression of days and the next one;s just been posted, hope you like it! Thanks, Jen!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, it was kind of a weird place to end the chapter...
    Very interesting developments, though. I hope Sev sees the cuff soon, because that is just bad news!!!

    Author's Response:

    I know, but . . .I had to end it somewhere.

    Severus will see the cuff in the next chapter, it is very bad and hopefully you enjoy the confrontation.

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love the conversation with Hagrid. It's nice to see Hagrid as someone who is gentle and understands Snape's vulnerability. McGonagal really seems ill-equiped to deal with Harry's problems. It fits with cannon: she's just not a significant figure to the Gryf's in a lot of ways. Still, I feel a little bad that she isn't checking up to see if Umbridge is stepping over the line in Harry's detentions (since she was already caught once) and to make sure Harry is taking care of himself. I hope the cuff is brought to someone's attention soon. The other boys must see it every day-- they live and shower together, doesn't it poke out of his shirt sleeve? Doesn't he scratch at it if it's so swollen and itchy? Wouldn't he scratch at it more when hepped up on a heavy stimulant? I'm looking forward to the conversation-- hopefully Sev will firmly remain an adult and help Harry. I'm so looking forward to them interacting, I wish Harry wasn't quite so messed up. Depressed people aren't exactly great listeners. I hope that Snape (or even just the narrator) sees some of Freedom in Harry. After so long in that form, I'd expect a little thing like a head tilt, or familar shuffling motion when excited to remain.

    Author's Response: I've always seen him as a gentle perosn, one who cares deeply for people, especially those who seem lost or alone, like Snape.  It always touched me that he defended Snape to Harry, Ron, & Hermione when they all thought he was evil during the Sorcerer' Stone.  McGonagall is preoccupied with her duties as Deputy Headmistress and she has always seemed to allow her House to make their own decisions up to a point and yes, she should have checked up on Harry and Umbridge as well.  They both needed to be watched.  The cuff will be brought to someone's attention very soon.  Harry has managed to keep the cuff hidden under the sleeve of his robe, which is always a little long and hangs over his hand slightly.  I would think he has taken great pains to hide it and probably waits for the shower.  he does scratch at it, but where no one can see, like beneath a desk.  As for if it would itch more with the Stimulant Draft . .. I don't know.  I never thought about it.  Harry is messed up partially due to the Stimulant Draft and partly for another reason which will be known next chapter.  Snape will see something very unexpected in Harry when he finally confronts him.  Thank you!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    brilliant!!! update really really soon please

    Author's Response: Thank you, I have just updated.
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: SentinelHuntress (Signed) [Report This]
    oh!! curious about so many things!
    a) what does the silver manacle really do?
    b) will he becom addicted to the potion?
    c) who will survive their upcoming confrontation?
    d) who killed Umbridge?
    I am looking forward to read the answers!

    Author's Response:

    Hi!

    Let's see if I can answer some of those questions and thanks for reading!

    a) the silver manacle is a very BAD item, more will be explained about it later!

    b) No, because Severus won't be letting him take any more of it.  You can't become addicted to one dose.

    c) no one dies, but things do get a little . . .hot

    d) she WILL be dying, maybe by Sev, maybe someone else, you'll find out!

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 2:16 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't lose your temper, Sev! Harry needs you to keep it together, the kid's falling apart here!

    *just had to put the pep talk in*

    Okay, I loved the chapter! Hagrid was awesome! Poor Harry, please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    It's good one too!

    Thanks and I have!


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