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Reviews For Broken Wings
I loved how you described Harry's state of mind, and how he manages to hide it. And Hagrid was great too :-) Author's Response: Thank you! I apologize, sort of for the cliffie. Now you can stop dying and start reading, LOL! I'm glad you noticed Harry' state of mind and that he knws how to hide it when necessary. Glad you enjoyed it and happy reading!
Author's Response: Thanks! The big discuaaion is posted!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next one's up!
Author's Response: No, it's not. Severus could notice the cuff that way . .. or some other way. You'll have to read the next chapter to find out! Thanks very much!
Author's Response: At the end of this chapter, yes he was more angry, though before that he was feeling very depressed and low. Severus should notice that soon! Thanks! The next one's up now!
I loved the talk with Hagrid. I never like it when authors make Snape (or any character!) *so* obstinate you need a sledgehammer to pound any scrap of sense into their skulls. Snape's smart; and Hagrid's what I call "country-wise"--he understands things without all the fancy ten-syllable words. Oh, but I *really* want Umbridge to get hers! ::growls:: ...do you have a Yahoo! Group or somesuch, where your most dedicated fans can cluster to all go *squeeee!* and sing your praises in counterpoint and argue plot points and everything? ::pleading puppy dog eyes:: Hunh? Hunh? Do ya?? Could ya?? Author's Response: Well, harry can't transform with it on, no matter how angry he is. And the cuff is really evil! Yes, Severus is trying hard to keep that temper under wraps . . .he can do it too, when he feels motivated enough. I agree about Severus and what you said. Snape is smart, he can see things differently if he has them presented a certain way, logically and with all the facts. He's stubborn, yes, but not blindly stubborn, like Ron Weasley can be at times. Yes, he does have problems with Harry comparing him to James, but once he really looks at Harry and sees him, he can admit that he was wrong and try and change. Hagrid too, he is country-wise, looking at the heart of something. Umbridge shall be getting it, don;t worry! A yahoo group . . no, but I guess i could make one, if someone would tell me how!
I'm surprised that Hermione didn't put a warning about the stimulant crash on the phial! Author's Response: Whoops, I went back and fixed that, but thanks for the heads up. I was having trouble uploading the chapter. Hermione might not have known all the side-effects, except that you should only take so much in a certain period of time, not all the potions recipes include every side effect.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Hope you like the next bit . . .see I posted fast, like I promised! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep reading!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like this so much to wait till the next one's up. Guess what??? It's HERE! :) |
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