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Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 2:01 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhh! did you feel you had to leave us with this evil cliffie? I'm dying to know what happens next, and I really hope Severus will manage to control his temper.
    I loved how you described Harry's state of mind, and how he manages to hide it. And Hagrid was great too :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I apologize, sort of for the cliffie.

    Now you can stop dying and start reading, LOL!

    I'm glad you noticed Harry' state of mind and that he knws how to hide it when necessary.

    Glad you enjoyed it and happy reading!

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 1:59 pm
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor Harry! Can't wait for the big discussion!

    Author's Response: Thanks! The big discuaaion is posted!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 1:39 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it all! So happy that Sev read the letter and talked to Hagrid! Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks! The next one's up!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 11:11 am
Reviewer: fairner (Anonymous) [Report This]
    0.0 uh oh what's gonna happen? unstable harry isn't very good....wonder if severus will notice the cuff maybe when he grabs harry's wrist when he leaves or something lol. love your story!

    Author's Response: No, it's not.  Severus could notice the cuff that way . .. or some other way.  You'll have to read the next chapter to find out! Thanks very much!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 8:56 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry seemed more angry then depressed. I am curious how the discussion will go... I hope Severus will find the inhibitor, too! Mila

    Author's Response: At the end of this chapter, yes he was more angry, though before that he was feeling very depressed and low.  Severus should notice that soon! Thanks! The next one's up now!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 7:56 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo, what a cliffie! Will Harry's magic do anything, or will Umbridge's little cuff suck it all away and give Severus a clue of what she's done? I hope he can keep his temper reined in--it looks like he's making progress, at least! And Harry too. =]

    I loved the talk with Hagrid. I never like it when authors make Snape (or any character!) *so* obstinate you need a sledgehammer to pound any scrap of sense into their skulls. Snape's smart; and Hagrid's what I call "country-wise"--he understands things without all the fancy ten-syllable words.

    Oh, but I *really* want Umbridge to get hers! ::growls::

    ...do you have a Yahoo! Group or somesuch, where your most dedicated fans can cluster to all go *squeeee!* and sing your praises in counterpoint and argue plot points and everything? ::pleading puppy dog eyes:: Hunh? Hunh? Do ya?? Could ya??

    Author's Response:

    Well, harry can't transform with it on, no matter how angry he is.  And the cuff is really evil!

    Yes, Severus is trying hard to keep that temper under wraps . . .he can do it too, when he feels motivated enough. 

    I agree about Severus and what you said.  Snape is smart, he can see things differently if he has them presented a certain way, logically and with all the facts.  He's stubborn, yes, but not blindly stubborn, like Ron Weasley can be at times.  Yes, he does have problems with Harry comparing him to James, but once he really looks at Harry and sees him, he can admit that he was wrong and try and change.  Hagrid too, he is country-wise, looking at the heart of something. 

    Umbridge shall be getting it, don;t worry!

    A yahoo group . . no, but I guess i could make one, if someone would tell me how!

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 7:27 am
Reviewer: skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really liked this chapter. It almost felt like you ended it mid-sentence though! There's not even a period :)

    I'm surprised that Hermione didn't put a warning about the stimulant crash on the phial!

    Author's Response:

    Whoops, I went back and fixed that, but thanks for the heads up.  I was having trouble uploading the chapter.

    Hermione might not have known all the side-effects, except that you should only take so much in a certain period of time, not all the potions recipes include every side effect.

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 6:59 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe, I won't scream, you update today. woot woot. perfect ending to a hectic ending of a semester. haha. :D thankies. and of course great just like all your other work.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, thank you!

    Hope you like the next bit . . .see I posted fast, like I promised! :D

Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 6:59 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapters keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep reading!
Title: Hagrid's Wisdom 23 Apr 2009 6:25 am
Reviewer: SageKiller (Signed) [Report This]
    Nuuuuuuuu! Aw cliffhangers, the bane of my existance! It was another awesome chapter of course, I'm so glad that Snape read the letter and is starting to care for Harry, but now I'll be on the edge of my seat till the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I'm glad you like this so much to wait till the next one's up.

    Guess what???

    It's HERE! :)


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