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Title: Through A Glass Darkly 02 Mar 2015 10:04 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    very nice!

    I actually feel sorry for Dolores... she's gonna get payback in spades if Severus has any say in the matter.

    --his
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 23 Jul 2009 4:34 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Sev hugged Harry and they finally made up! I wa sso happy when Snape admitted he was wrong to treat Harry like that. Yay! Now let's see what he does to that bitch Umbridge! Get her, Sev!

    Author's Response: Yeah they both needed that talk and now they can begin to try and have a decent relationship as friends.  Oh he will, don;t doubt it.  She's going down!!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 28 May 2009 9:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well they had the chat and i'm glad it worked out and that harry will have the help he needs to deal with the toad i hope i havn't insulted the toad population all over the world, if i have i am very sorry.

    sev really has a great friend in harry and together they will succeed

    Author's Response:

    I think the toads will forgive you. *grins*

    Harry will find Severus is a good friend and vice versa.

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 25 Apr 2009 3:06 am
Reviewer: Rae (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please update soon! Let Umbridge get a taste of her own medicine... her bad medicine

    Author's Response: Thanks, i just have updated and you can see what happens to the Evil One!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    They certainly did - so wonderful. The catharsis at the end had an especially nice build up - I keep expecting it happen and expecting it to happen, but the place you gave it was very nicely timed. I'm looking forward to Severus' confrontation with Umbridge. Will she find another 'crime' to blackmail him with? Will she go to Azkaban? Will all the owls gang up against her and all dive-bomb her at once until she runs out of the school? I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: I wanted the catharsis to come in at the end of the chapter, after they had finally talked and Harry had forgiven Severus, because then he would feel comfortable leaning on Sev emotionally.  Sev's confrontation with Umbridge ought to be great fun! You'll see what happens to her in the next post!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 9:37 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay1 They finally got back together1 I'm so happy for them. This was a wonderful turning point. Now let's see Umbridge get what she deserves.

    Author's Response: Your wish is my command! Thank you!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved it when Severus hugged Harry and called him fledgling. Such a beautiful moment.

    Author's Response: Aww, I loved that part too!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 8:27 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    When I don't think you can surprise me any more, you do. When Sev called Harry "fledgling." I was smiling and crying at the same time, I was so moved. This chapter was perfect!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response: Thanks that makes me feel great.  I wasn't sure if it was too mushy, but I guess not.  Sev calling him fledgling made me tear up too! And now you can see what happens with Umbridge!
Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised and happy to see such a quick update. This is a warm and fuzzy chapter and it's rewarding to see Snape as an adult taking care of a child in trouble. It's the sort of chapter that makes me want to reread the whole thing again just to experience it more fully in context.

    Thank goodness something is to be done about the cuff. I suppose it's Umbridge's hubris that she would do something so incriminating; as a bureaucrat, I always imagine her twisting the law rather than just breaking it.

    Author's Response:

    Severus does have his moments, especially once he feels secure enough to express his feelings.  He really does care about Harry.  I'm honored you would re-read my fic even though it's not done yet. 

    Umbridge has a lot of hubris, she has gone mad with power and that is why she dared to put the cuff on Harry.

Title: Through A Glass Darkly 24 Apr 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    That was good; I'm not fooled though, I think Severus and Harry are going to have a lot more problems and misunderstandings between each other before things are really resolved. They've got years of angst between them and I think they will probably need to discuss Lily in more depth at some point.

    Anyway, I like how Severus realized that Harry was really more like himself than anyone else and held Harry when he really needed it. Oh, and the cuff! I'm so glad Severus discovered it! Thank goodness it didn't get any worse! They'll figure this thing out yet...now, if only they could get rid of Umbridge.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    That's true, they will have some more issues to work out and Lily will be a big part of those issues, as will Sirius.

    Severus seeing Harry like himself at that age was a key breakthrough in his change of heart towards Harry, because only then did he see how hurt the boy was and how he needed a reliable adult to help him. The cuff will be gotten rid of . . . as will the toad! Read the next chapter and see!


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