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Reviews For Broken Wings
I actually feel sorry for Dolores... she's gonna get payback in spades if Severus has any say in the matter. --his
Author's Response: Yeah they both needed that talk and now they can begin to try and have a decent relationship as friends. Oh he will, don;t doubt it. She's going down!!
sev really has a great friend in harry and together they will succeed Author's Response: I think the toads will forgive you. *grins* Harry will find Severus is a good friend and vice versa.
Author's Response: Thanks, i just have updated and you can see what happens to the Evil One!
Author's Response: I wanted the catharsis to come in at the end of the chapter, after they had finally talked and Harry had forgiven Severus, because then he would feel comfortable leaning on Sev emotionally. Sev's confrontation with Umbridge ought to be great fun! You'll see what happens to her in the next post!
Author's Response: Your wish is my command! Thank you!
Author's Response: Aww, I loved that part too!
Dancingkatz Author's Response: Thanks that makes me feel great. I wasn't sure if it was too mushy, but I guess not. Sev calling him fledgling made me tear up too! And now you can see what happens with Umbridge!
Thank goodness something is to be done about the cuff. I suppose it's Umbridge's hubris that she would do something so incriminating; as a bureaucrat, I always imagine her twisting the law rather than just breaking it. Author's Response: Severus does have his moments, especially once he feels secure enough to express his feelings. He really does care about Harry. I'm honored you would re-read my fic even though it's not done yet. Umbridge has a lot of hubris, she has gone mad with power and that is why she dared to put the cuff on Harry.
Anyway, I like how Severus realized that Harry was really more like himself than anyone else and held Harry when he really needed it. Oh, and the cuff! I'm so glad Severus discovered it! Thank goodness it didn't get any worse! They'll figure this thing out yet...now, if only they could get rid of Umbridge. -P.G. Author's Response: That's true, they will have some more issues to work out and Lily will be a big part of those issues, as will Sirius. Severus seeing Harry like himself at that age was a key breakthrough in his change of heart towards Harry, because only then did he see how hurt the boy was and how he needed a reliable adult to help him. The cuff will be gotten rid of . . . as will the toad! Read the next chapter and see! |
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