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Reviews For Broken Wings
Title: The Toad At Bay 27 Apr 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved the way you killed her off! I hope Harry and Severus have a good experience with the Occlumency this time around! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and it should be better than last time, considering that harry and Sev are actually getting along this time.
Title: The Toad At Bay 27 Apr 2009 1:51 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! They are still outside, sorry when you made Snape summon the First Aid I thought he was indoors XD my mistake.

    o.O ONE VERY GOOD reason to stay away from the Forbidden Forest! AND don't wear pink! lol

    Author's Response: Yes, that's for sure! And watch out for gigantic man-eating birds!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 9:05 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I hadn't been expecting her to die. I'm a bit surprised that Severus isn't more upset that Harry took things into his own hands. I don't think Harry really set out meaning to kill her, but more that it just happened that way.

    Is Dumbley going to come back now? Please update soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, he knows the kid does things by impulse, and he didn't intend to really hurt her, it wasn't anyone's fault the bird woke up . . .unless you count Umbridge screaming!

    He will be back, but not for awhile yet! Gives Severus and Harry some time to bond some more. 

    And I've updated!

Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 8:21 am
Reviewer: LinerRocks (Signed) [Report This]
    MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
    Hecks yes! *does happy dance*
    Ding dong, the witch is dead!
    :] this made my day even though I spent it at a theme park
    you're awesome

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

     

Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 6:50 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay1 I'm so glad she's dead and the way you did it was incredible. I love the idea of Severus and Harry being mentor and apprentice.

    Author's Response: All right! Hope you like the next one!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    See, I go away for a couple of days and the umbitch dies. Love it! Harry as the apprentice? Hehehehe! Draco and Ron are going to both be beyond livid! Can't wait! And Dumbles comes back to Snape's wrath over Harry's home life. Go for it!

    Author's Response: They are and God help Dumbledore when Snape and Harry get through with him.  Isn't it great? I've a new one up!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 3:33 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ding dong the witch is dead.....wonderful!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: The Toad At Bay 26 Apr 2009 12:45 am
Reviewer: SageKiller (Signed) [Report This]
    You killed Umbridge...my hero!!! Beautiful confrontation, and McGonagall's reaction was priceless! But Ron! I hope they make up soon, it's so sad when they fight. Next chapter sounds interesting, I'd love to see your take on learning Occlumency.

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Yes Minerva does have her moments.  They will make up, eventually. 
Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoooooo!!!!! Hooray! The wicked witch is dead!! Although, I am a little disturbed at how easily Harry and Severus and Minerva are okay with that. Harry did just unintentionally help kill someone.

    I loved how Severus called Freedom back to him and told him to transform back into Harry. :) And how Harry is now his new Potions Apprentice!! Awesome. I have a feeling that Harry shouldn't be transforming though unless a teacher tells him he can, just in case he has another accident.

    Great chapter and I am so glad that you updated and that Umbridge is gone for good!! I wonder if any of the other students watched it happen though.

    Thanks so much for the update!!! :D

    Author's Response:

    Well, nobody knew the bird would come out of the forest, it was a chance happening, but considering how terrible Umbridge was, I don't think they'd feel too bad about her death.  They did try and arrest her and would have succeeded if not for the bird. 

    No, he shouldn't, and Minerva will tell him so next chapter. 

    As for anyone else seeing it, that too will be addressed next time! Thanks for your awesome reviews! :)

Title: The Toad At Bay 25 Apr 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot. Much wonderfulness. I LOVE how Harry set the birds after Umbrage, though it bothers me a bit that they killed her, for some reason. W/e. Funfunfunfunfunfunfun

    Author's Response: Well, they didn;t set out to kill her--the Stymphalian Bird just appeared and it was a surprise to everyone there.  Harry only wanted the owls to harass her, he never expected the monster bird to come and make a meal of her.  But such is life. 

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