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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: Thanks and it should be better than last time, considering that harry and Sev are actually getting along this time.
o.O ONE VERY GOOD reason to stay away from the Forbidden Forest! AND don't wear pink! lol Author's Response: Yes, that's for sure! And watch out for gigantic man-eating birds!
Is Dumbley going to come back now? Please update soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Well, he knows the kid does things by impulse, and he didn't intend to really hurt her, it wasn't anyone's fault the bird woke up . . .unless you count Umbridge screaming! He will be back, but not for awhile yet! Gives Severus and Harry some time to bond some more. And I've updated!
Hecks yes! *does happy dance* Ding dong, the witch is dead! :] this made my day even though I spent it at a theme park you're awesome Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: All right! Hope you like the next one!
Author's Response: They are and God help Dumbledore when Snape and Harry get through with him. Isn't it great? I've a new one up!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Yes Minerva does have her moments. They will make up, eventually.
I loved how Severus called Freedom back to him and told him to transform back into Harry. :) And how Harry is now his new Potions Apprentice!! Awesome. I have a feeling that Harry shouldn't be transforming though unless a teacher tells him he can, just in case he has another accident. Great chapter and I am so glad that you updated and that Umbridge is gone for good!! I wonder if any of the other students watched it happen though. Thanks so much for the update!!! :D Author's Response: Well, nobody knew the bird would come out of the forest, it was a chance happening, but considering how terrible Umbridge was, I don't think they'd feel too bad about her death. They did try and arrest her and would have succeeded if not for the bird. No, he shouldn't, and Minerva will tell him so next chapter. As for anyone else seeing it, that too will be addressed next time! Thanks for your awesome reviews! :)
Author's Response: Well, they didn;t set out to kill her--the Stymphalian Bird just appeared and it was a surprise to everyone there. Harry only wanted the owls to harass her, he never expected the monster bird to come and make a meal of her. But such is life. |
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