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Reviews For Broken Wings
I like the complication with Ron and I can't wait to see Sev and Harry try to relate as two people (rather than just wizard and familiar). Author's Response: Yes, I agree. Umbridge was soo awful . . . as bad as Moldy Voldy in her way. I agree with the canon message, since it seems that JKR wanted to have a self-suffiecine tboy hero who can solve things that most adults would have trouble dealing with. It's sad, really, since every child should have one adult he can count on. That's why I made it so that Severus is there for Harry and to a lesser extent so are McGonagall and Hagrid. Because you're right, no child should be expected to save the world and suffer in silence. I believe that one of the main components of a hero is that you can rely on others to help you and cooperation is more important to solve problems that bravery and those solo Charge of the Valkyries. But that's me. Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: Wow that's a cool rhyme! Glad you enjoyed her death so much, I certainly enjoyed giving her what she deserved for once.
Author's Response: It was, and the picture I saw on the web was even scarier! Thanks and hope you like the next bit.
So, what type of bird is Severus? You can no longer deny it! You haven't responded to any of my reviews so I /know/ he's an animagus! C'mon, why do you have to keep me in suspense??? Update soon, darling. Author's Response: Well, eight or nine, you never know how it'll work out. What makes you think he's a bird??? Well, sweetie, if I told you . . .it'd ruin the surprise!! And we wouldn;t want that, now would we? The next one is up now, so enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks! Claps now that the b**** is dead!
Good job with Ron's attitude and reactions. He always reacts first and then thinks later. Sometimes much, much later. Snape's apprentice, eh? Well done. He'll get some remedial help he should have gotten in first year, someone to look over his homework assignments, a reason for being with Snape as much as he not-so-secretly wants, and more importantly has an adult he can talk to and rely on. Well done, indeed. Author's Response: That's quite true, since Fudge would have done something to keep her out of Azkaban. Bad for his image . . .you know. And you know what they say . . .sometimes karma takes a hand. Ron does indeed react first and think about it later. Yes, he will, and Severus will be sure to give him the stability and guidance as well as compassion the boy needs. Thanks!
So as Snape's apprentice, does Harry have to live with him? Will that give Snape custody over Harry, and what happens if he reports Harry's relatives? I know, I know, so many questions! LOL! Update soon please I can't wait to see what happens next. Will you show a confrontation with the muggles and Snape? Author's Response: No, the Stymphalaina Bird was not summoned by Freedom, he didn;t even know it existed. It was just bad timing . . .or luck . . .or karma coming back onto her. Well, he could . . .but not right away. You'll see what the apprenticeship entails next chapter, and I would imagine Severus could report them for negligence and other abuse if he wanted to. Yes, I could do that too, I don;t know what I'll be doing in regards to them yet, though.
Pity Ron is not adult yet to see sense, hope he will be cured of it. The part in Umbridge's office was great! Ancient justice came upon her head. Author's Response: Yes, Ron needs a reality check and a stern talking to from someone! Glad you enjoyed Dolores's fate. Ancient justice came, all right, and it saw and it conquered.
I really liked the quarrel between Harry and Ron, I think you managed to paint a really IC Ron. And I liked McGonagall, and her solution for Harry and Severus :-) Author's Response: Isn;t it great~ let's have a party!! Oh good, because sometimes Ron is hard for me to write. Minerva can be very clever at times, especially when it comes to helping out Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad too! Now you can see how harry and Sev are getting along. |
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