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Title: Mentor 02 Mar 2015 11:23 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Apprentice.. vry good. They spend time together and it appears as an order from Deputy-Head.

    --his
Title: Mentor 12 Oct 2009 5:41 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha! Loved the end of the chapter. They're getting along so well. I'm very happy!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1
Title: Mentor 28 May 2009 10:58 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i would love to see sev tuck harry up in bed. great chapter pleased that sev and harry are apprentice and teacher and at last crabbe has got himself a backbone and standing up to malfoy, i hope he does well with his apprenticeship.

    Author's Response:

    Wouldn;t that be so cute?? Of course, Harry would probably die . . .

    Yes Crabbe has finally found himself and Hagrid will be a good mentor to him.

Title: Mentor 29 Apr 2009 4:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, Snape thinking Harry needs a sense of humor, that's rich ;D

    I'm really happy about this mentor/ward development, it's a good idea for several reasons. The other Professor and student match-ups were interesting too, especially Hagrid and Crabbe. I have a feeling that he may need Hagrid's support later on if he decides to oppose becoming a death eater...

    UMBRIDGE IS DEAD, Halleluiah! :D No one grieves the wicked, I know I won’t. Her death was very satisfying (though morbid) and it really was poetic justice. I also see similarities between it and Trelawney’s prediction. I'm glad Fudge admitted he was wrong about her, and that band is gone for good!

    Good luck to Harry and Occlumency! And I hope Ron grows up, I hate to see good friends fight.

    Author's Response:

    Sometimes Severus surprises me when I'm writing, like he did there.

    Glad you liked that idea, it came from out of the blue, and you're right, Hagrid could help Crabbe when and if he decides to stand up to his DE father.

    It's time to have a party, cause the B**** is dead, and the only one who cares is Voldy . . .maybe even he doesn;t care, LOL! Fudge finally got a clue and that band wa sjust begging to be destroyed.

    Harry's going to need all the luck he can get.  Ron will come around soon.

    And the next one's been posted. Happy reading!

Title: Mentor 29 Apr 2009 3:59 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another fabulous chapter! I'm usually very soft-hearted, but I actually laughed as Umbridge met her end...does that make me an evil person?

    Glad everything worked out with Ministry and I love that Harry and Severus are officialy bonded now. What a big step for the both of them.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    No, because otherwise I'd be one for writing her death, LOL!

    I think we all like to see the bad girl get hers, since I was kind of disappointed in canon, I thought she deserved much more than she got. 

    It is a big step and the two of them should hopefully learn how to deal with it to their mutual satisfaction.

    The next one's up and it has the Occlumency lessons in it.

Title: Mentor 29 Apr 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay1 A new chapter! I'm really glad Fudge didn't try and attack Harry or accuse him of anything . . .well he did have irrefutable proof, but still . . .

    Love the Snape-Harry bonding moments and I'm so glad Harry told Severus about the Voldemort thing. He needed to know. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Occasionally Fudge isn't as stupid as he seems.

    I also enjoy those parts and have updated!

Title: Mentor 29 Apr 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story. I am sorry I didn't review each chapter, but I was sucked in and just wanted to find out what happened next. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks and what a nice complement!
Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 11:54 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, the bonding moments were so sweet! Loved it! Can't wait to see what else happens.

    Author's Response: Thanks1 Hope you enjoy the rest!
Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ok, /now/ there's eight chapters to go.

    Is Severus an Animagus? That's all I want to know, I sear! And what about my e-mail? Did you even /get/ it? What have you been doing that you don't have time to reply to little ol' me?

    Are you maybe... working on a certain sequel, perhaps?

    I love Freedom! As for me believing Sev's a bird... Come on. I know you too well. I can just picture the two of them soaring together.

    Ok, update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, and I thought I sent a reply to you.  I was sure I did . . .

    I will be working on that sequel soon AFTER wings. 

    Keep picturing the image in your mind, Julie! 'Cause I'm not telling until . .. it's time for you to know. 

    Sorry about the suspense, but that plotline is crucial to the story.

    Bye for now!

Title: Mentor 28 Apr 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to occulmency lessons-- they were such a disaster in the book. No matter how much I like Snape, I find it difficult to justfy how awful those lessons are in cannon: obscure direction, attack (in a horrible, invasive way that is difficult to imagine), and yell. There are some great fan versions of occulmency lessons-- so far *A Year Like None Other* by Aspeninthesunlight is my favorite. I can't recall the story right now, but my favorite fan excuse for Snape's horrible lessons was that Dumbledore (an evil version) assured Snape that he was teaching Harry defensive lessons, and Snape was supposed attack and test him.

    The *Broken Wings* world is based on a very different relationship between Sev and Harry, but I'm curious about the conflict the lessons are likely to bring. Since the cuff is off, I'm hoping for some Hawk!Harry soon-- just a little, maybe?

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, Hawk!Harry will be making an appearance next chapter.

    The Occlumency lessons won;t be the total awful disaster they were in canon, although the evil Dumbledore version would make sense.

    But I have my own version of them and a reason why Severus finds it so difficult to teach it, besides Harry's attitude.  Well, here, he doesn;t have an attitude towards learning it, but he does get frustrated and well, you'll see what happens.  There will be a conflict though, since it's such a sensitive subject.


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