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Title: An Unruly Potions Class 03 Mar 2015 1:37 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent teaching skills, Harry.

    --his
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 15 Dec 2011 10:52 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    I had to laugh as I reread this chapter (I have only read this story twice before lol... It's one of my favorites:) because I am a grad student and recently taught a semester of English to college freshmen. My first day was so similar to Harrys... And I never could read their writing! Lol

    Author's Response: You mean they didn't give you typed up papers? I thought all college students used a WP by now, LOL! Now back in the day when I was teaching seventh graders . . . everything was written by hand and sometimes . . . I used to wonder if they skipped the month they were taught handwriting, even the printing was bad!
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 08 Jun 2011 1:57 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am sitting here cracking up because Harry wants to use Snape's cloak. Kill me! That is hillarious. Harry really should just be himself and not want to use the cloak. Snape is just a hillarious charachter when you think about it...
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 25 Apr 2010 9:27 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    You definitely captured a classroom of unruly kids quite well and homework really is not a whole lot of fun to grade, even when kids have access to computers...sometimes I wonder why I assign homework at all and yet, I do. Excellent description on all fronts.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It helped that I actually had to go through this! yeah when I was teaching computers weren't a factor yet, because I taught preschool.
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 14 Feb 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Harry's new little reputaion concerning his eyes

    Author's Response: That is pretty funny. But it makes sense, right?
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 12 Oct 2009 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a class! harry sure has his hands full. Now I'm glad I never became a teacher. Poor Jace, I wish I could strangle Malfoy!

    The Re-do spell, LOL! I cracked up laughing. Now I'm off to read the Order meeting. Yay!

    Author's Response: Yeah and that class was similar to one of mine. 
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 10 May 2009 3:16 pm
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought Harry did quite well, for all the reasons that Sev eventually pointed out. I am glad that Sev realised that poor Jace had been set up and that Harry caught one of the real culprits up to no good the next time. More Dracos in the making.

    I thought we would hear a bit more from Draco. Vince was great trying to help Jace early on.

    Good chapter.

    Lesley~

    Author's Response:

    Sev is pretty savvy when it comes to his Slytherins, and he would know immediately when something smelled fishy.  That incident actually happened to me once, and I felt really bad afterwrads and the ones who set up the other student earned themselves a nice detention for two days. 

    Draco will be back later on.  And you'll see more of Vince and Jace too in a later chapter.

Title: An Unruly Potions Class 04 May 2009 6:53 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice. I like your shy firstie. He's cute! I also like how Harry finally got everybody under control in the first class - considering what he was dealing with it really wasn't that badly done. :-)

    Author's Response: Yeah, Jace is sweet! You'll see a bit more of him next chapter.  Harry does manage to rise to the occasion, that class was really wild.  Like one that I used to have.  It was like Troublemakers 101.
Title: An Unruly Potions Class 03 May 2009 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, yes! This brings back memories, lol! Love the 're-do' spell. My son is a frequent victim of that one...you'd think he'd learn to just do it neatly the first time, wouldn't you?

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! You don't know how many times I had to write that on my students' assignments.  I think that's why in high school and middle school, teachers now let kids type their assignments.

    Your son sounds like my nephew, who has some of the worst handwriting ever and his teacher tells him to re-write half of his homework and to take his time. 

    The next chapter should be up soon and thanks for reading.:)

Title: An Unruly Potions Class 03 May 2009 8:56 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, homework is the nightmare of all teachers. I dealt with it for 16 years. Enough was enough, and I changed careers. All the work you put into teaching them and if they bother to do the homework, it's crap...and don't get me started on grading tests!

    Loved the first class session. :-)

    Author's Response: Ugh! I don;t blame you, I dealth with it for five years, teaching different grades, mind . . .I switched from 7th to pre-K thinking it'd be a nice change . . .till I got the preschoolers from Satan's playground . . .and ended up writing more incident reports than anyhting else.  Thanks for reading and I'll have the next one up soon!

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