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Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 8:47 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow1 Loved this chapter, Sirius really needed to hear what Harry said and I hope Remus can get him to see sense before he says something unforgivable to Severus or Harry.

    Author's Response: That's great, Remus is probably the only one who can make Sirius listen to reason. 
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Aeryun (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOOHHHH! Thank you! Someone finally let Sirius have it! :D It's Remus' turn next. Can't wait for more! :D

    Author's Response: Yes, I had fun writing this chapter.  I always felt he got away with a bit too much in the original series.  Nobody ever really called him on the awful way he behaved in canon.  It kind of got shrugged off.  That was not right, which is why that doesn't happen in my fic.  More has been posted!
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 5:07 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    You go Harry! As much as I like Sirius someone has needed to take him down a peg for ages. Just as a side note...I don't remember Kreacher actually helping much in OoTP, but heck it's your story...

    Author's Response: Yes that's for sure and it's better coming from Harry, it'll have more of an impact.  Kreacher was ordered to help by Sirius, so he did, since he is bound to obey him. 
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 4:39 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, You replaced one idiot with another. Ron now Siri. and the old dog just may NOT be able to learn a new trick this time--unless Moony can shake some sense into him.

    That conversation/arguement was very well crafted, by the way. I could feel the emotions rolling off of the page. Well done.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, sometimes it happens that way.  Moony will be lucky if Sirius listens to him. 

    Thank you, i try really hard to keep my dialogue believable and let my readers feel it.

Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 4:35 pm
Reviewer: IceMousie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    More please!! I don't think I've ever seen a plot like this so well developed!!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much.  I try really hard to keep my plot lines workable.  Please read more!
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 7:47 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    sulky child Sirius is lol. yum scones, XD reminds me of high school breakfast..makes me wants some...AHHH!!! Must not eat all that sugar though! lol anyway it's so frustrating when someone you really love doesn't understand your choice even after you explain it.

    Author's Response:

    Yes he certainly is.  I love scones too . . .chocolate chip & orange cranberry are my faves.

    Frustration is for sure! Poor Harry!

Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 6:55 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I really liked the confrontation between Sirius and Harry. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks I tried hard to make it seem real.  Hope you like the next one!
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 6:01 am
Reviewer: CrazyDragon (Signed) [Report This]
    WHEEEE!! Mt. St. Sirius has erupted, and he's spilling down the slopes towards the little townful of folks at his feet! Run for cover, Order members! ::snickering from the snug confines of my trusty flak jacket::

    Boy you do Sirius' teenage-style angst well!! I wanted to pop Sirius one *right* in the kisser--! He's an otherwise (probably; jury's still out for me) intelligent man, who goes into meltdown at the mere mention of his arch-nemesis... ::snort:: His Att-i-tude ought'a last a good few chapters! ::whips out a bottle of Valium and offers it for Harry and Severus--just in case Severus is running low on Calming Draught as well as time to brew more:: I really enjoyed Harry letting Sirius have it, though--the git deserves a good yelling-at, at the *very* least. Remus' reaction ought to be rather fun, too, at least in how it will likely set Sirius off yet again!

    I'll bet Sirius is gonna go spare on Snape yet again during the Order meeting. >=] I know, I know--that's a sucker bet...::rubbing hands gleefully and settling back to wait for next chapter::

    Author's Response:

    Oh yeah, he's like erupting all over! Run away! Run away!

    Thanks, I used my own nephew as a model, LOL!

    Sev and Harry thank you, they're going to need it.

    He does indeed and Remus will be getting his arse yelled at too. 

    Uh yeah that'll probably happen.  The next one's up. 

Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 3:51 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot. Much goodness. Sirius is being such a git! It seems like him, though - he always was more than a bit childish. Poor Harry!

    Author's Response: Yes, he was.  He never really grew up in canon.  Harry hopes Sirius will eventually understand, but it will take awhile.
Title: No Excuse 05 May 2009 2:38 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm kind of curious whether or not your Sirius is going to meet his deadly fate at the Ministry or not. If there's a plan and it's followed, I don't think he would. It would certainly be more interesting to keep him around and see how things progress between him and Harry. I'd hate to see him die before things were resolved between them.

    Good chapter--I was so surprised that Harry attacked Sirius! That would be pretty scary. I had a bird attack me once and I can only imagine what it's like to have a huge hawk up in your face!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Well, you'll see soon. I'm working on that part now.  I never liked him dying any way.

    Yes, it was, but Siri did deserve it.  Thanks!


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