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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: That's great, Remus is probably the only one who can make Sirius listen to reason.
Author's Response: Yes, I had fun writing this chapter. I always felt he got away with a bit too much in the original series. Nobody ever really called him on the awful way he behaved in canon. It kind of got shrugged off. That was not right, which is why that doesn't happen in my fic. More has been posted!
Author's Response: Yes that's for sure and it's better coming from Harry, it'll have more of an impact. Kreacher was ordered to help by Sirius, so he did, since he is bound to obey him.
That conversation/arguement was very well crafted, by the way. I could feel the emotions rolling off of the page. Well done. V. Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes it happens that way. Moony will be lucky if Sirius listens to him. Thank you, i try really hard to keep my dialogue believable and let my readers feel it.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I try really hard to keep my plot lines workable. Please read more!
Author's Response: Yes he certainly is. I love scones too . . .chocolate chip & orange cranberry are my faves. Frustration is for sure! Poor Harry!
Author's Response: Thanks I tried hard to make it seem real. Hope you like the next one!
Boy you do Sirius' teenage-style angst well!! I wanted to pop Sirius one *right* in the kisser--! He's an otherwise (probably; jury's still out for me) intelligent man, who goes into meltdown at the mere mention of his arch-nemesis... ::snort:: His Att-i-tude ought'a last a good few chapters! ::whips out a bottle of Valium and offers it for Harry and Severus--just in case Severus is running low on Calming Draught as well as time to brew more:: I really enjoyed Harry letting Sirius have it, though--the git deserves a good yelling-at, at the *very* least. Remus' reaction ought to be rather fun, too, at least in how it will likely set Sirius off yet again! I'll bet Sirius is gonna go spare on Snape yet again during the Order meeting. >=] I know, I know--that's a sucker bet...::rubbing hands gleefully and settling back to wait for next chapter:: Author's Response: Oh yeah, he's like erupting all over! Run away! Run away! Thanks, I used my own nephew as a model, LOL! Sev and Harry thank you, they're going to need it. He does indeed and Remus will be getting his arse yelled at too. Uh yeah that'll probably happen. The next one's up.
Author's Response: Yes, he was. He never really grew up in canon. Harry hopes Sirius will eventually understand, but it will take awhile.
Good chapter--I was so surprised that Harry attacked Sirius! That would be pretty scary. I had a bird attack me once and I can only imagine what it's like to have a huge hawk up in your face! -P.G. Author's Response: Well, you'll see soon. I'm working on that part now. I never liked him dying any way. Yes, it was, but Siri did deserve it. Thanks! |
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