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Reviews For Broken Wings
Author's Response: He sure is but that's why he's a Gryffindor!
Author's Response: I know what you mean. I'm glad you liked how I portrayed all of them, at times I wasn't sure if they were all IC or not, but it was a neat chapter to write.
I also like Sev as acting general of the OoP-- it's great to see some common sense injected into the battle plans. I'm a little suprized by Harry being part of the plan-- couldn't a polyjuiced person or Tonks take his place? If it's not a real prophesy, does it still need the real person to grab it? I understand that for purposes of drama we want Harry at the battle, still, it seems very risky. Author's Response: Remus really came through here for Harry and he'd be the only one who could use that particular argument successfully. Actually Sirius too nearly two weeks to even formulate an apology, so it really wasn't that quick. I wanted to do a scene with him thinking, because it showed how Remus's words affected him and how he had a hard time making up his mind. Glad you liked it. I figured Sev would be the one to take charge, really he seems to be the only one who does strategy well, aside from Moody, but Moody seems content to let someone else call the shots. He's more a sergeant than an officer. Now Sev's an officer. Harry had to be there, he;s the only one who could pcik up the prophecy, Polyjuice wouldn't work, it would know Tonks wasn't Harry, and even the false prophecy has to follow the rules. It is a bit risky, but he'll be with a trained team of adult Aurors, not kids, and they will all watch out for him. Plus, he needs to be at the Ministry for another reason besides the original one, you'll see what I mean next chapter. As always, thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Yes, that's a relief, isn;t it! Get ready for some action, though! Author's Response: Yes, that's a relief, isn;t it! Get ready for some action, though!
I'm glad Sirius apologized, but am a bit worried that you might kill him off soon :(. That's no fun; I hope things go a bit differently with the new plan. Great job! -P.G. Author's Response: I liked that part too, i thought it would be interesting to show That Severus found it really hard to forgive Sirius for what he did . . .and it was very nasty. Well, you can see what happens soon, i should be posting later on tonight.
I really hope that Sirius comes around. I'm anxious to see what happens with the trap and Voldie. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: Yeah it was very intense. But then, those two can really go at it. That's very true and hopefully they can resolve this. You can see the trap soon as I'll be posting ASAP.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Author's Response: So do I, actually1 Just kidding! Hng on the next chapter should be posted soon.
Author's Response: Because, even though Severus , Dumbledore, and Harry know the prophecy is false, no one else, including Voldemort does. It's an opportunity to get some DE arrested and/or killed resisting arrest and maybe even nail Voldemort. He might not die permanently when his body does, but he'll be out of commission for a long while, which will give them time to go and hunt for Horcruxes.
V. Author's Response: Yes, they needed to. As for what I'm following . . .you'll see! |
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