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Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 13 Oct 2009 3:47 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes and I'm glad Sirius FINALLY came to his senses. Oh but that man is stubborn! Damn! Loved how Harry and Sev dealt with him. I can't wait to see what happens next with Voldy. I hope he dies.

    Author's Response: He sure is but that's why he's a Gryffindor!
Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 14 May 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter! Molly's concern was touching but over the top, just like Molly should be. Snape and Harry were terrific, too. I really loved Sirius, though, and Remus, too. Both were very believable and both were very human. The best part was the end. I loved what Snape did (well, I didn't Love it, but it was justice and I agreed) and I love how Harry and Sirius dealt with it. All in all a very good chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I know what you mean. 

    I'm glad you liked how I portrayed all of them, at times I wasn't sure if they were all IC or not, but it was a neat chapter to write.

Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 08 May 2009 7:07 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Remus! I love Lupin pointing out how much of a Black Sirius is being. The problem with Sev and Sirius was resolved rather fast, but I'm sure it won't be that simple. The Sirius POV was very good-- it really made the scene interesting and seem more realistic.
    I also like Sev as acting general of the OoP-- it's great to see some common sense injected into the battle plans. I'm a little suprized by Harry being part of the plan-- couldn't a polyjuiced person or Tonks take his place? If it's not a real prophesy, does it still need the real person to grab it? I understand that for purposes of drama we want Harry at the battle, still, it seems very risky.

    Author's Response:

    Remus really came through here for Harry and he'd be the only one who could use that particular argument successfully.  Actually Sirius too nearly two weeks to even formulate an apology, so it really wasn't that quick.  I wanted to do a scene with him thinking, because it showed how Remus's words affected him and how he had a hard time making up his mind.  Glad you liked it.

    I figured Sev would be the one to take charge, really he seems to be the only one who does strategy well, aside from Moody, but Moody seems content to let someone else call the shots.  He's more a sergeant than an officer.  Now Sev's an officer.  Harry had to be there, he;s the only one who could pcik up the prophecy, Polyjuice wouldn't work, it would know Tonks wasn't Harry, and even the false prophecy has to follow the rules.  It is a bit risky, but he'll be with a trained team of adult Aurors, not kids, and they will all watch out for him.  Plus, he needs to be at the Ministry for another reason besides the original one, you'll see what I mean next chapter.  As always, thanks for reviewing!

Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 08 May 2009 12:59 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! What a brilliant chapter! Go Harry! Go Snape! And thank God, Sirius has started to grow up! Can't wait for the next part!

    Author's Response: Yes, that's a relief, isn;t it! Get ready for some action, though!

    Author's Response: Yes, that's a relief, isn;t it! Get ready for some action, though!
Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job--I especially liked the part where Snape is debating in his head whether or not to forgive Sirius, then looks at Harry's eyes and gives in. That whole inner battle was very amusing.

    I'm glad Sirius apologized, but am a bit worried that you might kill him off soon :(. That's no fun; I hope things go a bit differently with the new plan.

    Great job!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    I liked that part too, i thought it would be interesting to show That Severus found it really hard to forgive Sirius for what he did . . .and it was very nasty. 

    Well, you can see what happens soon, i should be posting later on tonight.

Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I don't know if Sirius will ever accept Snape as Harry's guardian, but that was one intense screaming match. Yikes. Poor Harry though. I really hope that things work out for them. Harry needs the support of both his Godfather and his guardian, and doesn't need them at each other's throat.

    I really hope that Sirius comes around. I'm anxious to see what happens with the trap and Voldie.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah it was very intense.  But then, those two can really go at it.  That's very true and hopefully they can resolve this. 

    You can see the trap soon as I'll be posting ASAP.

Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 6:24 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    SQQUUUEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 6:02 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Loved how Remus talked to Sirius and there'a truce, between Sirius and Snape, at least. One broken nose later, that is. And yes, he did deserve it! hope everything goes according to plan at the Ministry.

    Author's Response: So do I, actually1 Just kidding! Hng on the next chapter should be posted soon.
Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 5:47 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    If the prophecy is a fake, why bother?

    Author's Response: Because, even though Severus , Dumbledore, and Harry know the prophecy is false, no one else, including Voldemort does.  It's an opportunity to get some DE arrested and/or killed resisting arrest and maybe even nail Voldemort. He might not die permanently when his body does, but he'll be out of commission for a long while, which will give them time to go and hunt for Horcruxes.
Title: To Outwit A Dark Lord 07 May 2009 5:06 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Harry and Siri made up. . . especially if you are following canon for the next event--(Please don't kill him off!! )

    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, they needed to.  As for what I'm following . . .you'll see!

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